Challenges— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms (e.g. "most hardest" -> "the hardest"). Use precise vocabulary (e.g. "practical experiments," "abstract concepts").

Exemplo: I find science the hardest subject at school. This is because it involves many abstract concepts and practical experiments that require careful attention. For example, understanding chemical reactions and carrying out lab work can be confusing without clear guidance.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with a concise reason and one clear example. Remove filler words ("like," "uh,") and use linking words ("because," "for example"). Use more natural phrasing ("push myself to achieve goals").

Exemplo: Yes, I often challenge myself because pushing my limits helps me grow. For example, last year I set a goal to learn coding and practiced for an hour every day, which improved my problem-solving skills.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize thoughts: state your opinion, give a reason, and provide one clear example. Correct grammar and coherence ("since childhood," "I try to accomplish challenges"). Avoid irrelevant or unclear references ("beast game").

Exemplo: Yes, I want a challenging life because challenges help me learn and become resilient. Since childhood I have enjoyed solving difficult problems, and recently I admired a documentary about people who train in wilderness survival to test their limits.

Sugestão: Provide a clear structure: topic sentence, two specific strategies, and a brief example. Improve grammar and phrasing ("I stay calm and try to solve problems myself; if needed, I ask friends for help"). Use linking words ("first," "then").

Exemplo: I usually stay calm and try to solve problems myself, and if I cannot, I ask friends for help. For instance, when I struggled with a group project deadline, I first broke tasks into smaller steps and then asked teammates to complete specific parts, which reduced stress and finished the work on time.

× I believe that science is the most hardest subject in the school.

✓ I believe that science is the hardest subject at school.

'Most hardest' is redundant and ungrammatical because 'hardest' is already the superlative form; use either 'most difficult' or 'hardest'. Also use 'at school' instead of 'in the school' for general reference to school subjects.

× Like whenever I am in my school, I suffer a lot whenever I do any kind of science related education or science related task.

✓ Whenever I am at school, I struggle a lot when I do any kind of science-related work.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Use 'whenever' once, replace 'suffer a lot' with 'struggle a lot' for natural collocation, 'at school' is idiomatic, and hyphenate 'science-related'. Remove redundant words to improve clarity.

× So yeah, I prefer for that the science in the school that time science is the most difficult and following this math is also is one kind of difficult for school learners.

✓ So yeah, I prefer science at school; at that time science is the most difficult, and after that, math is also difficult for students.

Many preposition and word-order issues: 'prefer for that' is incorrect — use 'prefer'; 'in the school' -> 'at school'; 'that time' -> 'at that time' or simply 'then'; 'following this' -> 'after that'; 'is also is' has duplicate verb; 'one kind of difficult' is unnatural — use 'difficult for students'.

× So challenging myself is also, uh, engaging myself into some kind of work.

✓ Challenging myself also involves engaging in some kind of work.

Original uses awkward reflexive structure and 'is also, uh, engaging myself into' which misuses verb forms. Use 'involves engaging in' and avoid redundant reflexive pronouns. Use 'in' after 'engaging' not 'into'.

× So yeah, I think most of the time I, whenever I face difficulties, I try to challenge myself.

✓ So yeah, I think most of the time, whenever I face difficulties, I try to challenge myself.

Mainly punctuation and word order; adding commas improves clarity. Tense is acceptable (present simple) for habitual actions.

× Yeah, like I am so since my childhood I am a curious person whenever I so any kind of challenge in front of me that I might try to accomplish those challenges without any interference.

✓ Yes, since my childhood I have been a curious person; whenever I see any kind of challenge in front of me, I try to accomplish it without interference.

Multiple issues: 'I am so since my childhood' is ungrammatical — use present perfect continuous or present perfect 'have been'; 'so' is unnecessary. 'so any kind of challenge' should be 'see any kind of challenge'; 'that I might try' is awkward — use 'I try'; 'those challenges' should match singular/plural; simplify to 'accomplish it' or 'accomplish them' depending on context.

× Like recently I saw some videos that they are performing like in survival, so in a beast game that they are surviving for their they are pushing themselves towards.

✓ Recently I saw some videos where people perform survival challenges; in those videos they try to survive and push themselves to the limit.

Original has unclear pronoun references ('they are performing like in survival', 'for their they are'). Use 'where people' to introduce the subject, 'survival challenges' is clearer, and 'push themselves to the limit' is a natural phrase. Remove redundant fillers like 'like'.

× First of all, I am a little bit calm person.

✓ First of all, I am a calm person.

Use 'a calm person' rather than 'a little bit calm person'. 'A little bit' modifies adjectives but is unnatural before a noun phrase; omit it or say 'a little calm' (less common).

× Whenever I face any kind of difficult challenges in front of me, that time I try to stay calm and face the challenges without with my ability.

✓ Whenever I face difficult challenges, I try to stay calm and face them with my abilities.

Remove 'in front of me' (redundant), 'that time' is unnecessary, and 'without with my ability' is contradictory and ungrammatical — choose 'with my abilities'.

× And in case if I face any kind of difficult challenge that I try to get some assistance from my friends.

✓ If I face a difficult challenge, I try to get some assistance from my friends.

'In case if' is redundant; use 'if' or 'in case'. Also simplify structure by removing unnecessary 'that'. Use 'a difficult challenge' rather than 'any kind of difficult challenge' for naturalness.

× So yeah, this is the way I usually deal with challenges in my life.

✓ So yeah, this is how I usually deal with challenges in my life.

'The way' is acceptable but 'how' is more natural in spoken English. Also maintain concise phrasing.