Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Also, clarify who 'wards' are or use a more common term. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I went to the Blue Mountains for my last holiday, where I enjoyed quality time with my husband and our children. It was wonderful to spend time surrounded by nature.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I like holidays because they give me the opportunity to relax and enjoy nature. Since I am usually busy, holidays allow me to spend quality time with my husband.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Avoid repetition and clarify your reasons with linking words. Be specific about why you like these holidays.

Exemplo: I like Canada Day, especially when it falls on a weekend, because it allows for extended celebrations. I also enjoy Christmas since it coincides with my husband's birthday, making it a special time for us.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using proper linking words and complete sentences. Avoid fragmented sentences and clarify your activities with specific details.

Exemplo: On holidays, I usually go outdoors with my family. We enjoy hiking together, solving puzzles, and taking time to relax and celebrate.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I like spending my days at home when I feel exhausted or tired. For example, after long meetings, I prefer to rest at home to recover my energy.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it helps me unwind from stress and anxiety. It also allows me to relax and create beautiful memories with my family.

Sugestão: Enhance your answer by correcting grammar and using linking words. Be more specific about why you prefer peaceful holidays and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I always prefer peaceful holidays because I love nature. Going to the mountains helps me escape stress and anxiety, making it the best way to relax.

× I went to Blue Mountains for my last holidays and it was the time when I spent quality time with my husband as well as with my wards.

✓ I went to the Blue Mountains for my last holiday and it was the time when I spent quality time with my husband as well as with my wards.

The phrase 'Blue Mountains' requires the definite article 'the' because it is a specific place name. Also, 'holidays' should be singular 'holiday' to match the singular past event being described.

× Yes, I like holidays because it always give me opportunity to relax and enjoy the nature as well as I.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they always give me the opportunity to relax and enjoy nature as well as myself.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with 'holidays'. 'Opportunity' needs the article 'the'. 'Enjoy the nature' should be 'enjoy nature' without 'the'. 'As well as I' is incorrect; it should be 'as well as myself'.

× So on holidays I can spend my days with my hubby and also it it is.

✓ So on holidays I can spend my days with my hubby and also it is.

The phrase 'it it is' contains a repeated word; the correct form is 'it is'. This is a typographical error rather than a grammar issue.

× I like Canada Day and it it is a great time when the public holiday falls on the weekend so I like that as well as Christmas is also my favorite public holiday because my husband birthday is fall on the same day so I like it.

✓ I like Canada Day and it is a great time when the public holiday falls on the weekend, so I like that. Christmas is also my favorite public holiday because my husband's birthday falls on the same day, so I like it.

Again, 'it it is' is a typographical error and should be 'it is'. 'My husband birthday' should be 'my husband's birthday' to show possession. 'Is fall' should be 'falls' to agree with the singular subject 'birthday'.

× I usually go outside with my family to spend some time with them as well as we also love to go for a hiking and we do puzzle there as well as we try to. Spend some time to relax and celebrate.

✓ I usually go outside with my family to spend some time with them. We also love to go hiking and do puzzles there, as well as try to spend some time to relax and celebrate.

'Go for a hiking' is incorrect; 'go hiking' is the correct form. 'We do puzzle' should be 'we do puzzles' to use the plural form. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× Yes, I like holidays because it always give me opportunity to relax and enjoy the nature as well as I.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they always give me the opportunity to relax and enjoy nature as well as myself.

The verb 'give' should agree with the plural subject 'holidays', so 'they always give' is correct. 'Opportunity' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Enjoy the nature' should be 'enjoy nature'. 'As well as I' is incorrect; 'as well as myself' is appropriate.

× Yes, I like holidays because it always give me opportunity to relax and enjoy the nature as well as I.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they always give me the opportunity to relax and enjoy nature as well as myself.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'holidays'; 'they' is correct. Also, 'as well as I' is incorrect in this context; 'as well as myself' is the proper reflexive pronoun.

× I like Canada Day and it it is a great time when the public holiday falls on the weekend so I like that as well as Christmas is also my favorite public holiday because my husband birthday is fall on the same day so I like it.

✓ I like Canada Day and it is a great time when the public holiday falls on the weekend, so I like that. Christmas is also my favorite public holiday because my husband's birthday falls on the same day, so I like it.

The phrase 'my husband birthday is fall on the same day' is incorrect; it should be 'my husband's birthday falls on the same day'. The preposition 'on' is used with 'falls' to indicate the day.

× I usually go outside with my family to spend some time with them as well as we also love to go for a hiking and we do puzzle there as well as we try to. Spend some time to relax and celebrate.

✓ I usually go outside with my family to spend some time with them. We also love to go hiking and do puzzles there, as well as try to spend some time to relax and celebrate.

The sentence is fragmented and contains pronoun and article errors. 'Go for a hiking' should be 'go hiking'. 'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles'. The sentence should be split for clarity.

× Basically, I prefer leisurely holiday so that I can unwind my stress and anxiety. It also allow allow me to relax and I can definitely make them beautiful memories with my family.

✓ Basically, I prefer a leisurely holiday so that I can unwind my stress and anxiety. It also allows me to relax and I can definitely make beautiful memories with my family.

'Leisurely holiday' needs the article 'a'. The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Them beautiful memories' is incorrect; 'beautiful memories' is correct without 'them'.