Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I also visited' and 'I also paid my visit'.

Exemplo: For my last summer vacation, I traveled to the USA and visited several places such as New York, Washington DC, Texas, and Niagara Falls. Additionally, I explored local caves and museums, and I had the opportunity to visit the NASA Space Center in Houston.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and be more specific about how holidays help you.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy holidays because they help me relieve the stress accumulated throughout the year. Moreover, knowing that a holiday is coming motivates me to finish my work efficiently. During holidays, I can relax and appreciate nature, which refreshes my mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. Please clarify the holiday name if possible, and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'holiday in everywhere'.

Exemplo: My favourite public holiday is Nivea. On this day, there is a holiday everywhere, so I can relax at home and watch movies with my parents. This tradition makes me happy and gives me a positive start to the year.

Sugestão: Your answer covers several activities but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'prosper my brain'.

Exemplo: During holidays, I like to relax by watching movies and series that I haven't had time to see before. Additionally, I enjoy reading books to expand my knowledge. Eating my favourite foods also makes the holiday more enjoyable and memorable.

Sugestão: Your answer is personal but has some grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Try to use more natural phrases and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: As an introvert, I prefer spending time at home because I can be alone without worrying about how I appear to others. At home, I enjoy watching movies and eating my favourite snacks, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words and correct articles to make your answer more natural.

Exemplo: I enjoy both leisurely and busy holidays, but I sometimes prefer busy ones because I don't like staying idle at home. Therefore, I like to visit my friends and family to meet them and have enjoyable conversations.

Sugestão: Your answer shows preference but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to use linking words and more precise vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I personally prefer an exciting holiday because it offers new experiences and surprises. For instance, I can visit interesting places and try fantastic food, which makes the holiday more enjoyable and memorable.

× I went to USA and I visited many places like New York, Washington DC, Texas, Niagara Falls.

✓ I went to the USA and visited many places like New York, Washington DC, Texas, and Niagara Falls.

The country name 'USA' requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, when listing places, it is better to use 'and' before the last item for correct sentence structure.

× I also paid my visit to the NASA Space Center that was in Houston.

✓ I also paid a visit to the NASA Space Center, which is in Houston.

The phrase 'paid my visit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'paid a visit'. Also, 'that was in Houston' should be 'which is in Houston' to correctly describe the location.

× Holidays can make a person relieve this overall stress they had for a year.

✓ Holidays can help a person relieve the overall stress they have had for a year.

The phrase 'make a person relieve' is incorrect; 'help a person relieve' is appropriate. Also, 'this overall stress' should be 'the overall stress' and tense consistency is needed with 'have had'.

× Having holiday is like a motivation for me to complete my work as I know I'm going for a fun holiday.

✓ Having a holiday is like a motivation for me to complete my work as I know I'm going for a fun holiday.

The noun 'holiday' is countable and requires the article 'a' when singular.

× It can help me get relaxed and enjoy the nature more.

✓ It can help me relax and enjoy nature more.

The verb 'get relaxed' is incorrect; 'help me relax' is correct. Also, 'the nature' should be 'nature' without the article.

× On the day of Nivea, there is holiday in everywhere.

✓ On the day of Nivea, there is a holiday everywhere.

The phrase 'in everywhere' is incorrect; 'everywhere' does not need a preposition. Also, 'holiday' is countable and requires the article 'a'.

× This makes me feel more happy and it makes me feel that I will have a good start of the year.

✓ This makes me feel happier and makes me feel that I will have a good start to the year.

'More happy' is incorrect; the comparative form 'happier' should be used. Also, the phrase 'start of the year' should be 'start to the year'.

× I watch some movies and series which have been pending by me.

✓ I watch some movies and series which have been pending for me.

The correct preposition with 'pending' in this context is 'for', not 'by'.

× I also read books so I can prosper my brain more.

✓ I also read books so I can improve my brain more.

The verb 'prosper' is incorrectly used; 'improve' is appropriate here.

× I like to eat my favorite things while I'm on holiday so making my holiday more memorable and enjoyable for me.

✓ I like to eat my favorite things while I'm on holiday, making my holiday more memorable and enjoyable for me.

The phrase 'so making' is incorrect; it should be 'making' to correctly connect the clauses.

× You know, at sitting home.

✓ You know, sitting at home.

The preposition 'at' should come after 'sitting' to form the correct phrase 'sitting at home'.

× Then I like to enjoy movies and have fun food with myself.

✓ Then I like to enjoy movies and have fun food by myself.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here; 'by myself' is the correct phrase to indicate doing something alone.

× So I like to have an busy holiday and visit my friends and families so I can meet them and have a fun chat with them.

✓ So I like to have a busy holiday and visit my friends and family so I can meet them and have a fun chat with them.

The article 'an' is incorrect before 'busy' which starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a'. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to relatives collectively.

× I will personally prefer an exciting holiday more.

✓ I will personally prefer an exciting holiday.

The word 'prefer' already implies comparison, so 'more' is redundant and should be removed.

× I know an exciting holiday, I can expect anything.

✓ I know that on an exciting holiday, I can expect anything.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a conjunction; adding 'that on' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.