Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn không đi đâu và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I didn't travel anywhere during my last holiday because I was busy preparing for my university entrance exam. Therefore, I stayed at home and focused on studying to get ready for the next school year.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ.

Exemplo: Yes, I love holidays, especially summer holidays, because they last much longer than other holidays. For instance, in Vietnam, summer holidays can be up to three months, which gives me plenty of time to relax, travel, and play games after a busy school year.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'people' không cần thêm 'every'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'parades fireworks'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I like the national holiday the best because the government usually gives every person 1000 Vietnamese Dong as a gift. This makes people happy since they have extra money to spend on their families or buy something special. Moreover, on national days, people celebrate with parades and fireworks, which create a joyful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'province' nên ở số nhiều nếu nói chung, và 'schooling through social media' không đúng nghĩa. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp hơn và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: During the holidays, I usually travel to different cities or provinces in Vietnam to explore new places and enjoy the summer break. However, sometimes I prefer to stay at home and relax by browsing social media on my smartphone to catch up with friends and news.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'schooling in media' và 'take around the cities'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I like spending my day at home. I usually relax by exercising, chatting with my friends, or browsing social media. However, sometimes I don't like staying at home for too long, so I go out to explore the city or travel to other provinces.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, 'busy is quite hot' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng liên từ và từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ nhẹ nhàng.

Exemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one because busy holidays can be exhausting and affect my mental health. On the other hand, leisurely holidays help me relax and prepare better for upcoming tasks creatively.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'recipes' thành 'dishes' và hoàn thiện ý cuối cùng. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer a peaceful holiday rather than an exciting one because it allows me to do things I love. For example, I enjoy traveling to other provinces by car, driving around cities, and trying new local dishes. I also like strolling around quietly during peaceful holidays.

× I spent most of my time prepared for university entrance exam or focusing on my school work.

✓ I spent most of my time preparing for the university entrance exam or focusing on my school work.

The verb 'prepared' is incorrectly used in past tense form here; the correct form after 'spent time' is the gerund 'preparing' to indicate ongoing action during that time.

× So stayed at home and used the time to get ready for next school year.

✓ So I stayed at home and used the time to get ready for the next school year.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' and the article 'the' before 'next school year' is missing, which are necessary for correct sentence structure and clarity.

× For example, summer holidays in Vietnam can be 3 months which usually time to relax, travel, spend time to play games after busy school years.

✓ For example, summer holidays in Vietnam can be 3 months, which is usually time to relax, travel, and spend time playing games after busy school years.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'which' and the phrase 'spend time to play games' should be 'spend time playing games' to use the correct gerund form after 'spend time'.

× This longer breaks help me relax.

✓ These longer breaks help me relax.

The demonstrative pronoun 'This' should be plural 'These' to agree with the plural noun 'breaks'.

× Well, I love the national holiday the best because government usually gives every people 1000 Vietnamese Dong as a gift.

✓ Well, I love the national holiday the best because the government usually gives every person 1000 Vietnamese Dong as a gift.

The noun 'government' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'every people' is incorrect; it should be 'every person' because 'every' is used with singular nouns.

× Besides, national days is the time when people celebrate and parades fireworks which create joyful.

✓ Besides, national days are the time when people celebrate and parade fireworks which create joy.

The subject 'national days' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'parades' should be 'parade' to agree with plural subject 'people'. 'Joyful' is an adjective; the noun 'joy' is correct here.

× Well, during the holidays, I usually travel to different cities or province in Vietnam to explore new places and enjoy the summer break.

✓ Well, during the holidays, I usually travel to different cities or provinces in Vietnam to explore new places and enjoy the summer break.

The word 'province' should be plural 'provinces' to match 'different cities' and maintain parallel structure.

× Sometimes I prefer to stay at home, relax by schooling through social media on my smartphone to catch up with friends and news.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to stay at home, relax by scrolling through social media on my smartphone to catch up with friends and news.

The verb 'schooling' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'scrolling' when referring to browsing social media.

× I usually relax at home by taking exercise or schooling in media, chatting with my friends or sometimes I'm not like to stay at home for a long time.

✓ I usually relax at home by exercising or scrolling through media, chatting with my friends, or sometimes I don't like to stay at home for a long time.

The phrase 'taking exercise' should be 'exercising'. 'Schooling in media' is incorrect; it should be 'scrolling through media'. Also, 'I'm not like' should be 'I don't like'.

× I usually take around the cities or traveling to other provinces.

✓ I usually go around the cities or travel to other provinces.

The phrase 'take around the cities' is incorrect; 'go around the cities' is correct. Also, 'traveling' should be parallel with 'go' as 'travel'.

× Well, I prefer leisurely holiday than busy holiday because busy is quite hot, it makes me feel tired and I don't have a good mental health.

✓ Well, I prefer a leisurely holiday to a busy holiday because busy holidays are quite hot, which makes me feel tired and I don't have good mental health.

The article 'a' is needed before 'leisurely holiday' and 'busy holiday'. 'Busy is quite hot' is unclear; it should be 'busy holidays are quite hot'. 'Mental health' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× So leisurely holidays make me feel relaxed and it's helped me to prepare for the holiday more useful and creative.

✓ So leisurely holidays make me feel relaxed and they help me prepare for the holiday in a more useful and creative way.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to refer to 'holidays'. 'Helped' should be present tense 'help' to match 'make'. 'More useful and creative' needs to be modified to 'in a more useful and creative way' for clarity.

× Well, I prefer peaceful holiday more than exciting holiday because I think that I can use that peaceful holiday to do things that I love.

✓ Well, I prefer a peaceful holiday more than an exciting holiday because I think that I can use that peaceful holiday to do things that I love.

The articles 'a' and 'an' are needed before 'peaceful holiday' and 'exciting holiday' respectively.

× For example, if I like to traveling to other province, I just take my own car and drive around the cities, enjoy the new recipes or I love peaceful holiday to strolling around the.

✓ For example, if I like to travel to another province, I just take my own car and drive around the cities, enjoy the new recipes, or I love a peaceful holiday to stroll around.

The verb 'traveling' should be 'travel' after 'like to'. 'Other province' should be 'another province'. 'Strolling' should be 'stroll' after 'to'. The sentence is incomplete and needs correction for clarity.