Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to structure your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response, then adding specific details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: My last holiday was in Manali, which is known as the Queen of Hills. I went there with my husband to spend some quality time together. I really enjoyed the serene environment and peaceful ambience, which made our trip very relaxing.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like 'at that time almost'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like holidays because they give me a chance to relax and spend quality time with my family and friends. During holidays, I enjoy visiting new places and creating happy memories together.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using proper sentence structure and linking words. Be specific and avoid unclear phrases like 'exchanges weeds to their kit and kings'.

Exemplo: My favourite public holiday is Diwali, which is a major festival in India. It is known as the festival of lights because people decorate their homes with lamps and colourful lights. We also enjoy bursting firecrackers and exchanging sweets with family and friends.

Sugestão: Try to answer clearly and directly. Use complete sentences and organise your ideas logically with linking words. Avoid incomplete thoughts and unclear expressions.

Exemplo: During holidays, I usually complete any pending work first. After that, if I have free time, I like to go out with my family and friends to enjoy various activities together.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Exemplo: As a workaholic, I prefer to spend my free time at home with my family. Because of our busy schedules, we rarely get to be together, so spending time at home helps strengthen our family bonds.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and complete. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and avoid unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer leisurely holidays because I have limited free time due to my busy work schedule. I enjoy spending this time with friends, doing outdoor activities like playing games or watching movies at the cinema.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and complete your sentences. Explain your preferences clearly with linking words and specific examples.

Exemplo: I prefer exciting holidays because I enjoy outdoor adventure activities like bungee jumping and paragliding. These thrilling experiences help rejuvenate my mind and give me a sense of excitement.

× I clearly remember that the last holiday that I spent with my husband and Manali which is known as the Queen of health and I love to spend the time, quality time with my with my husband and I love the serene and ambience environment that I enjoyed over there apart from this.

✓ I clearly remember that the last holiday I spent with my husband was in Manali, which is known as the Queen of Hills. I love to spend quality time with my husband, and I enjoyed the serene and ambient environment there.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and missing connectors. It also misuses 'Queen of health' instead of 'Queen of Hills'. Breaking it into clear sentences and correcting the phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love to spend time with my families or friends by going different places and enjoy our memories.

✓ I love to spend time with my family or friends by going to different places and enjoying our memories.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'going different places' needs the preposition 'to'. 'Enjoy' should be 'enjoying' to match the gerund form after 'by'.

× The public holiday which I like the best is Diwali is the festival of India and I think that is known as the lighting festival where most of the people lighting their house or colour their house and enjoy firecrackers as well as exchanges weeds to their kit and kings so.

✓ The public holiday I like best is Diwali, which is a festival in India known as the festival of lights. Most people light their houses, decorate them with colors, enjoy firecrackers, and exchange sweets with their family and friends.

The original sentence is confusing and contains multiple errors including incorrect word choice ('lighting festival' should be 'festival of lights', 'colour their house' should be 'decorate their houses with colors', 'exchanges weeds to their kit and kings' is incorrect and should be 'exchange sweets with their family and friends'). Breaking it into clear sentences and correcting vocabulary improves clarity.

× On the time of holidays, so I do Why do variety offer activities or tasks? First of all, I will I give more preference to the pending worker Thereafter, if I have a more time on the holidays at that time I go for I go outside with my friends as well as with my family in order to.

✓ During holidays, I do a variety of activities or tasks. First of all, I give more preference to pending work. Thereafter, if I have more time during the holidays, I go outside with my friends as well as with my family.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Why do variety offer activities or tasks?' and 'I will I give more preference to the pending worker'. Correcting sentence structure and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Being a workaholic person, when I have a free time at that time, I give more preference to spend time at home with my family because nowadays due to the hectic schedule, spending time with the family is quite less. So if we spend more time with our family, it strengthens our bond and sometime I.

✓ Being a workaholic person, when I have free time, I prefer to spend it at home with my family because nowadays, due to hectic schedules, spending time with family is quite limited. Spending more time with family strengthens our bond.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains awkward phrasing like 'I give more preference to spend time' and 'spending time with the family is quite less'. Simplifying and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer a leisure holiday because being a workaholic person I have a quite less leisure time so I enjoyed it with my friends while doing outdoor activities like playing games or watching movies in cinema. Apart from this if I have more leisure time then I spend.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because, being a workaholic person, I have quite little leisure time, so I enjoy it with my friends by doing outdoor activities like playing games or watching movies in the cinema. Apart from this, if I have more leisure time, then I spend it accordingly.

'Leisure' should be 'leisurely' to describe the holiday. 'Quite less' is incorrect; 'quite little' is appropriate. 'Enjoyed' should be 'enjoy' to match present tense. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× I would prefer exciting holidays because I love to do outdoor thriller activities like banjo jumping, paragliding. So if I would like to chance to do exciting activities or exciting holidays, I give more preference to it because it rejuvenate my mind and how.

✓ I would prefer exciting holidays because I love to do outdoor thrilling activities like bungee jumping and paragliding. So if I get a chance to do exciting activities or go on exciting holidays, I give them more preference because they rejuvenate my mind and body.

'Banjo jumping' is incorrect; the correct term is 'bungee jumping'. 'Thriller activities' should be 'thrilling activities'. 'If I would like to chance' is incorrect; it should be 'if I get a chance'. 'Rejuvenate' should be 'rejuvenate' with plural subject 'they'. The sentence is incomplete and needs correction for clarity and grammar.