Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly state the place you visited and describe your experience with specific details. Avoid repetitive phrases and incorrect verb tenses. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I went to a place called Chechnya in Turkey for my last holiday. I went there with three of my friends, and we had a lot of fun exploring the area. It was my first time going without my family, which made the experience even more exciting and memorable.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys your feelings well but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your thoughts.

Exemplo: I love holidays because they give me a break from my busy schedule. During holidays, I feel relaxed and have time to care for myself and spend quality moments with my friends and family. When I'm busy, I often feel anxious and overwhelmed.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and off-topic regarding the question about public holidays. Try to directly answer the question by naming a public holiday you like and explain why. Use clear sentences and linking words to organize your ideas.

Exemplo: My favorite public holiday is New Year's Day because I enjoy celebrating with my closest friends. We usually go to a private beach or have dinner together, which makes the holiday special and fun.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetitive phrases. Try to clearly state your main activities during holidays and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague expressions.

Exemplo: During holidays, I usually spend time with my friends. We often meet up because we like visiting the same cities and vacation spots. Besides socializing, I also take time to relax and unwind.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast your feelings and provide clearer explanations.

Exemplo: Sometimes, I like to spend my day at home when I feel tired or frustrated because it helps me relax. However, when I'm in a good mood, I prefer going out with my friends to create memorable experiences.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Try to explain your preference with specific reasons and avoid awkward phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because the main purpose of a holiday is to relax and unwind. I believe busy holidays can be stressful and negatively affect my mindset.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but slightly repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly. Also, provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: If I'm exhausted, I prefer a peaceful holiday to rest and recharge. However, when I'm in an energetic mood, I enjoy an exciting holiday that includes activities like seeing celebrities or dining at fancy restaurants.

× I go to some place in Turkey which calls Chechnya and I go there because I have a lot of fun.

✓ I went to some place in Turkey called Chechnya and I went there because I had a lot of fun.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' and 'calls' should be 'called' to correctly indicate past actions.

× Every time that I go here, I go change my constantly and I go with my three friends and we did a lot of fun.

✓ Every time that I went there, I constantly changed and I went with my three friends and we had a lot of fun.

The sentence refers to repeated past actions, so past tense verbs are needed. 'Go' should be 'went', 'change' should be 'changed', and 'did a lot of fun' is incorrect; it should be 'had a lot of fun'.

× My family didn't come with me for the first time in holidays and I experienced a great holiday.

✓ My family didn't come with me for the first time on holiday and I experienced a great holiday.

The phrase 'in holidays' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on holiday' or 'on holidays'. Also, 'didn't come' and 'experienced' are correctly in past tense.

× I do love holidays because I hate being busy and don't have enough time for myself or my friend or my family.

✓ I do love holidays because I hate being busy and don't have enough time for myself or my friends or my family.

The plural form 'friends' is appropriate here because it refers to more than one person. Also, 'do love' is acceptable for emphasis.

× And in whole day I feel very relaxed because when I'm very busy I feel very anxious and I think I don't have enough time for anything that I can do and I don't have enough time for myself care.

✓ And the whole day I feel very relaxed because when I'm very busy I feel very anxious and I think I don't have enough time for anything that I can do and I don't have enough time for self-care.

The phrase 'in whole day' is incorrect; it should be 'the whole day'. Also, 'myself care' should be 'self-care' as it is a noun.

× I don't like going to Five Stars hotel because I was liking it when I was younger because of the because of the sea and the Aqua parks in there.

✓ I don't like going to Five Stars hotel because I liked it when I was younger because of the sea and the aqua parks there.

'Was liking' is incorrect; 'liked' is the correct past tense form. Also, 'the because of the' is redundant and should be simplified.

× But right now I prefer to go vacation with my closest friends and have fun with them or go to a private beach or having a dinner with them.

✓ But right now I prefer to go on vacation with my closest friends and have fun with them or go to a private beach or have dinner with them.

The phrase 'go vacation' is incorrect; it should be 'go on vacation'. Also, 'having a dinner' should be 'have dinner' to maintain parallel structure.

× For me the minor thing about holidays is being with my friends.

✓ For me, the main thing about holidays is being with my friends.

'Minor thing' is incorrect in this context; 'main thing' is appropriate. Also, a comma after 'For me' improves clarity.

× I basically meet up with my friends or almost like encounter with my friends in everywhere that I go because we always go to the same cities or prefer the same vacation size.

✓ I basically meet up with my friends or almost encounter my friends everywhere that I go because we always go to the same cities or prefer the same vacation spots.

'Encounter with' is incorrect; 'encounter' does not require 'with'. 'In everywhere' should be 'everywhere'. 'Vacation size' is unclear; 'vacation spots' is more appropriate.

× But I basically get relaxed and sometime or I don't know just relax.

✓ But I basically get relaxed and sometimes, I don't know, just relax.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Adding commas improves readability.

× Sometimes I do like to spend my time at home when I'm so tired or when I feel so sad or like frustrated.

✓ Sometimes I do like to spend my time at home when I'm very tired or when I feel sad or frustrated.

'So tired' is acceptable but 'very tired' is more natural. 'Like frustrated' is incorrect; 'frustrated' alone is correct.

× I want to be in home, but if I'm my enjoyable mood for that time, I want to go out and have phenomenal memories with my other friends.

✓ I want to be at home, but if I'm in a good mood at that time, I want to go out and make phenomenal memories with my other friends.

'In home' should be 'at home'. 'I'm my enjoyable mood' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm in a good mood'. 'Have phenomenal memories' is better expressed as 'make phenomenal memories'.

× I perform a leisurely holiday because I think it's the main purpose of the holiday.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I think it's the main purpose of the holiday.

'Perform a leisurely holiday' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express choice.

× You need to be relaxed and chill out or everything that you need to be not very hard or harmful for you.

✓ You need to be relaxed and chill out; everything you do should not be very hard or harmful for you.

The original sentence is confusing and incorrectly uses 'or'. Using a semicolon and rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× I think busy holidays are very harmful for my mindset.

✓ I think busy holidays are very harmful to my mindset.

The correct preposition with 'harmful' is 'to', not 'for'.

× If I'm exhausted I prefer a peaceful holiday but if I'm in my entertainment mood I prefer a exciting holiday with maybe seeing some celebrities or going to fancy restaurants.

✓ If I'm exhausted, I prefer a peaceful holiday, but if I'm in my entertainment mood, I prefer an exciting holiday, maybe seeing some celebrities or going to fancy restaurants.

'A exciting' should be 'an exciting' because 'exciting' starts with a vowel sound. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× But if I'm exhausted I do like just chill out.

✓ But if I'm exhausted, I just like to chill out.

'I do like just chill out' is awkward; 'I just like to chill out' is more natural. Adding a comma after 'exhausted' improves readability.