Holidays— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use past tense, reduce repetition, and add a specific detail or activity. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use a linking phrase if needed.

Exemplo: I went to Tumagate and Sikiso Island with my friends last month. We stayed in a small guesthouse and spent our days swimming and hiking, which made the trip very enjoyable.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use singular/plural correctly (family/families), avoid filler sounds, and give a specific example of an activity and its result. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy holidays because I can spend quality time with my family and friends. For example, we often cook a big meal together and make lasting memories talking late into the evening.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct vocabulary (e.g., "Lunar New Year"), explain why it is special with specific details, and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite public holiday is the Lunar New Year because people return home to celebrate with their families. We prepare traditional food, visit relatives, and enjoy fireworks and parades together.

Sugestão: Use clear, complete sentences and specific activities. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "watch fly was in the midnight"). Mention a small number of typical activities in order using linking words.

Exemplo: On holidays I usually watch movies with my family and then go out to see the midnight fireworks. On the first day of the new year, I visit relatives to wish them well and share a special meal.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use natural phrasing, and add a reason with a specific example of what you learn or enjoy when traveling. Keep it within two sentences if possible.

Exemplo: I prefer going out during holidays because I enjoy the atmosphere and exploring new places. For instance, when I visit a new city I like trying local food and learning about customs and traditions.

Sugestão: Use correct adjectives (leisurely), avoid filler words, and give a reason or brief example of how you relax. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I can relax and recharge. For example, I like to read, take long walks, and have unhurried meals with my family.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, use correct singular/plural forms, and list 2–3 specific peaceful activities using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer a peaceful holiday where I can spend time with my family. For example, we often watch movies together, cook a special meal, or play ball games in the park.

× I go to the Tumagate and Sikiso Island, uh, I go with my friends and when they are with my friends and I enjoy our holiday.

✓ I went to Tumagate and Sikiso Island with my friends, and we enjoyed our holiday.

The question asked about a past holiday, so the verbs should be in the past tense (went, enjoyed). The original also repeats 'they are with my friends' which is incorrect and redundant. Suggestion: use a single past-tense clause to report the trip and the enjoyment.

× Yes, I like holidays because at this time I can spend my time with my families and my friends.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because at this time I can spend time with my family and my friends.

'Families' is incorrect when referring to one person's family; use the singular 'family'. Also 'spend my time' is wordy; 'spend time' is more natural. Use consistent singular/plural forms.

× We have a, a, a lots of time, uh, do something together and have a good memory.

✓ We have lots of time to do things together and make good memories.

Use 'lots of time' (not 'a lots of time') and 'do things' (countable plural) and 'make good memories' is the natural collocation. Remove filler pauses for clarity.

× Superbly holiday I like best is lunar new year it is special holiday in my country many people from another country come back to their hometown to target with their family and.

✓ The holiday I like best is Lunar New Year. It is a special holiday in my country; many people who live in other places return to their hometowns to celebrate with their family.

Sentence had word order and word choice errors ('Superbly holiday', 'target with'). Use a clear subject-verb structure, add the article 'a' before 'special holiday', and use 'return' and 'celebrate' for intended meaning. Also pluralize 'hometowns' to match 'many people'.

× In holiday I usually watch movie with my family and go outside to watch fly was in the midnight and come back up and have a good night.

✓ On holidays I usually watch movies with my family, go outside to watch fireworks at midnight, and then come back home and have a good night.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'holidays'. Use plural 'movies' or 'a movie'. 'Watch fly was' is incorrect; likely 'watch fireworks'. Use 'at midnight' and 'come back home'. Maintain parallel verb forms in a list.

× After that in the first day of new year I come and visit my.

✓ After that, on the first day of the new year I visited my relatives.

The event is in the past, so use past tense 'visited'. Use 'on the first day of the new year' and complete the object (e.g., 'relatives' or 'family'). 'I come and visit my' is incomplete and present-tense.

× Uh, actually I want to go outside and enjoy the atmosphere in each holiday.

✓ Actually, I like to go outside and enjoy the atmosphere on every holiday.

Use 'like to' or 'want to' consistently; 'each holiday' is better expressed as 'every holiday' or 'on each holiday'. Use 'on' with holiday expressions.

× I want to travel to the new city or new country to learn about new culture.

✓ I want to travel to a new city or a new country to learn about new cultures.

Use the article 'a' before 'new city/country' and pluralize 'culture' to 'cultures' when speaking generally. Also avoid missing articles.

× Late I like leisurely literally holiday. I can enjoy the my holiday by calm down and take it easy.

✓ Lately I like leisurely holidays. I can enjoy my holiday by calming down and taking it easy.

Use 'lately' (not 'late') and plural 'holidays' for general preference. Use gerunds after 'by' ('calming down', 'taking it easy'). Remove extra 'the' before 'my holiday'.

× I don't want busy in holiday, just enjoy this moment.

✓ I don't want to be busy on holiday; I just want to enjoy the moment.

Use the infinitive 'to be busy' and preposition 'on holiday'. Also 'this moment' is better as 'the moment' or 'the moment' depending on context; 'enjoy the moment' is natural.

× I, I think I prefer a peaceful holidays.

✓ I think I prefer peaceful holidays.

Use either 'a peaceful holiday' (singular) or 'peaceful holidays' (plural) but not 'a ... holidays'. Remove extra filler 'I, I'.

× I want just uh hang out with my family and have do something together like watch movie or cooking or just play ball game.

✓ I just want to hang out with my family and do things together like watching a movie, cooking, or just playing ball games.

After 'want' use the infinitive 'to hang out'. Use parallel gerunds for the list: 'watching a movie, cooking, playing ball games'. Use articles ('a movie') and pluralize 'ball games' for general activities.