Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "Yes, we keep plants at home because my father loves gardening. He often brings new plants and grows them as a hobby, and we all enjoy it."

Exemplo: Yes, we keep plants at home because my father loves gardening. He often brings new plants and grows them as a hobby, and we all enjoy it.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words smoothly. Also, be more specific about why you liked the plants. For example, "When I was young, I loved sunflowers because their bright colors gave me positive energy and made me feel happy. Additionally, I liked tulips because they looked simple and cute."

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved sunflowers because their bright colors gave me positive energy and made me feel happy. Additionally, I liked tulips because they looked simple and cute.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and correct sentences. Use linking words to organize your ideas. For example, "I don't know much about growing plants, but I understand the growth cycle. For instance, plants need oxygen, water, and sunlight to grow. However, I don't have detailed information about planting."

Exemplo: I don't know much about growing plants, but I understand the growth cycle. For instance, plants need oxygen, water, and sunlight to grow. However, I don't have detailed information about planting.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and word choice. For example, "Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they are thoughtful presents that carry many emotions. Therefore, plants are preferred over other gifts."

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they are thoughtful presents that carry many emotions. Therefore, plants are preferred over other gifts.

× Yes we do because my father loves planting and so each here and then he brings a new plant and starts growing seeds as his hobby and we're all stuck with his hobby.

✓ Yes, we do because my father loves planting and so every now and then he brings a new plant and starts growing seeds as his hobby and we're all stuck with his hobby.

The phrase 'each here and then' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'every now and then' to indicate something happening occasionally. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× When I was young I used to love sunflowers because the colors of the flowers I gave me a positive energy and it was like welcoming and so lovely and used to make me happy.

✓ When I was young I used to love sunflowers because the colors of the flowers gave me positive energy and were welcoming and so lovely and used to make me happy.

The phrase 'the colors of the flowers I gave me' is incorrect; 'I' should be removed to correctly say 'the colors of the flowers gave me'. Also, 'it was like welcoming' is awkward; 'were welcoming' agrees with plural 'colors' and is more natural.

× Adding to that, I used to love tulips because it was cute and simple.

✓ Adding to that, I used to love tulips because they were cute and simple.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'tulips'; the correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'were' matches the plural subject.

× I don't really know about growing plant but I do know the cycle of how the plant itself grows.

✓ I don't really know about growing plants but I do know the cycle of how the plant itself grows.

The noun 'plant' should be plural 'plants' when speaking generally about growing plants.

× So I know that the plan the plant needs as 02 and water and sun so it can help the plant grow.

✓ So I know that the plant needs O2, water, and sun so it can help the plant grow.

The phrase 'the plan the plant needs as 02' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'the plant needs O2' (oxygen). Also, 'O2' is the correct chemical notation. The article 'the' before 'plan' is incorrect and 'plan' is a typo for 'plant'.

× But I don't really have like leap informations about planting.

✓ But I don't really have much information about planting.

The phrase 'like leap informations' is incorrect. 'Information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'. Also, 'much' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns.

× Yes, Chinese people do send plants as gifts because Chinese people love to give thoughtful presence and present who withholds many emotions, so they prefer giving plants as gifts more than any other things.

✓ Yes, Chinese people do send plants as gifts because they love to give thoughtful presents and gifts that hold many emotions, so they prefer giving plants as gifts more than anything else.

The word 'presence' is incorrect; it should be 'presents' meaning gifts. 'Present who withholds many emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'gifts that hold many emotions'. Also, 'any other things' should be 'anything else' for correct quantifier usage.