Part 1
Examinador
Do you keep plants at home?
Candidato
No I don't as I'm not good at take care of plants. I tried growing them before but just after a few days they were dead so I gave up.
Examinador
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Candidato
I started with some easier to care flowers such as Junko and the Actually my mother helped me a lot. It survived for a long time.
Examinador
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Candidato
I just know about some basic knowledge such as some plants are more preferring the dry conditions so we shouldn't watering them so much and we should.
Examinador
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Candidato
Yes we do, and specifically Chinese people always send fresh and natural vegetables to others to show our respect and care to a people.
Do you keep plants at home?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如“I'm not good at take care of plants”应为“I'm not good at taking care of plants”。句子结构较简单,且内容略显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并增加细节使回答更丰富。
Exemplo: No, I don't keep plants at home because I'm not very good at taking care of them. I once tried growing some, but they died after a few days, so I decided to stop.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题,如“Junko”和“the Actually”不明确,句子不完整。建议明确植物名称,使用连贯的句子,并补充细节。
Exemplo: When I was young, I started growing easy-to-care-for flowers like sunflowers. Actually, my mother helped me a lot, so the plants survived for a long time.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多,句子不完整且表达不清。建议使用完整句子,正确使用时态和语法,并具体说明植物养护知识。
Exemplo: I know some basic facts about growing plants. For example, some plants prefer dry conditions, so we shouldn't water them too much to keep them healthy.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中“send fresh and natural vegetables”与问题不符,且表达不够自然。建议直接回答是否送植物,并举例说明送植物的文化意义。
Exemplo: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts. For example, giving a potted plant symbolizes good luck and respect in our culture.
× No I don't as I'm not good at take care of plants.
✓ No, I don't as I'm not good at taking care of plants.
动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式,表示擅长做某事,因此 'take care' 应改为 'taking care'。
× I tried growing them before but just after a few days they were dead so I gave up.
✓ I tried growing them before, but after just a few days they died, so I gave up.
描述过去发生的动作时,动词应使用过去式。'were dead' 应改为 'died',因为这里强调动作的发生。
× I started with some easier to care flowers such as Junko and the Actually my mother helped me a lot.
✓ I started with some easier-to-care-for flowers such as Junko. Actually, my mother helped me a lot.
'flowers' 是复数,'easier to care' 结构不完整,应改为 'easier-to-care-for' 作为复合形容词修饰复数名词。句子中断句不清,需分开。
× It survived for a long time.
✓ They survived for a long time.
前文提到的是复数 'flowers',代词应使用复数 'they',而非单数 'it'。
× I just know about some basic knowledge such as some plants are more preferring the dry conditions so we shouldn't watering them so much and we should.
✓ I just know some basic knowledge, such as some plants prefer dry conditions, so we shouldn't water them so much.
'more preferring' 用法错误,动词 'prefer' 不用进行时,且 'watering' 应为动词原形 'water'。句子末尾不完整,应删去多余部分。
× Yes we do, and specifically Chinese people always send fresh and natural vegetables to others to show our respect and care to a people.
✓ Yes, we do. Specifically, Chinese people always send fresh and natural vegetables to others to show our respect and care for people.
'a people' 用法错误,'people' 本身为复数,前面不加冠词。'respect and care to' 应改为 'respect and care for'。句子需断句更清晰。