Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use clear and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'plants' not 'plans'), and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother and I love plants, so we always keep several in our garden. Watching them grow helps me feel relaxed and unwind, which is very soothing.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or feelings about the plant. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar.

Exemplo: When I was a child, my mother taught me to grow lilies, which represent purity and elegance. I still enjoy planting lilies today because they remind me of my childhood.

Sugestão: Avoid vague phrases like 'everything' and 'so much things'. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'fertilize' instead of 'fertilizer') and organise your answer with clear points linked logically. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: I love gardening and know quite a lot about it, such as planting seeds, caring for blossoms, fertilizing plants, and turning over the soil to keep it healthy.

Sugestão: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples or reasons. Also, be careful with grammar and vocabulary to make your answer clear and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, in China, it is becoming popular to give plants as gifts on special occasions because plants symbolize life and help people feel connected to nature.

× My mother and I are really into plans, so we always keep long, keep plans in the garden because when uh, we see the plant cycle which we will make me feel relaxed and unwind.

✓ My mother and I are really into plants, so we always keep long plants in the garden because when, uh, we see the plant cycle it makes me feel relaxed and unwind.

The word 'plans' is a misspelling of 'plants', which is a plural noun. Also, 'keep long, keep plans' is incorrect; it should be 'keep long plants'. The phrase 'which we will make me feel' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it makes me feel' to correctly express the effect of seeing the plant cycle.

× When I was a child, my mother always taught me to grow Lily, which is a representative of pure purity and elegance.

✓ When I was a child, my mother always taught me to grow lilies, which are representatives of purity and elegance.

The noun 'Lily' should be pluralized to 'lilies' when referring to the plant in general. Also, 'which is a representative' should be 'which are representatives' to agree with the plural subject 'lilies'. The phrase 'pure purity' is redundant; 'purity' alone suffices.

× So until now, I still love planting Lily. I think the Lily gives.

✓ So until now, I still love planting lilies. I think lilies give me joy.

The sentence 'I think the Lily gives.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object to complete the meaning. Also, 'Lily' should be plural 'lilies' to match the general reference. Adding 'give me joy' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I'm really a garden like lover so I think I know everything about growing a bunch including uh, seeds, blossoms, how to fertilizer, how to uh, turn over the soil and so much things.

✓ I'm really a garden lover, so I think I know everything about growing plants including, uh, seeds, blossoms, how to fertilize, how to, uh, turn over the soil and many other things.

The phrase 'garden like lover' is incorrect; it should be 'garden lover'. 'Growing a bunch' is vague and should be 'growing plants'. 'How to fertilizer' is incorrect; the verb form 'fertilize' should be used. 'So much things' is incorrect; 'many other things' is appropriate for countable nouns.

× In China, there is a positive trend that people tend to send plants as gifts during the important moment.

✓ In China, there is a positive trend that people tend to send plants as gifts during important moments.

The phrase 'the important moment' is incorrect because it implies a specific moment; 'important moments' is more appropriate to indicate general occasions.

× Because you know the plant is a symbol of the life you can see, you can connect to the nature and get a.

✓ Because, you know, plants are symbols of life you can see; you can connect to nature and feel refreshed.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'The plant is a symbol of the life you can see' should be plural 'plants are symbols of life'. 'Connect to the nature' is incorrect; it should be 'connect to nature'. The phrase 'and get a' is incomplete and needs to be finished with a proper object or feeling.