PlantsPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you keep plants at home?

Candidato

Yes I do, I have a couple of green plants in my living room, nothing too fancy, just a few to decorate the space. They really help me relax and study, focus on my studies.

Examinador

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Candidato

Yes, when I was a kid I remember growing beans in primary school for science project. We planned these small pilots, waters them every day and watching them slowly sprout. It was such an interesting and experience for me.

Examinador

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Candidato

Yes I do, I know some basic knowledge such as factors the plants need, sufficient sunlight, water and suitable soil. I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watching her doing it.

Examinador

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Candidato

Yes, people in China do give plants, but it's not that coming. Usually it's friends or family giving like the bamboo or orchids. Like when someone move into the new home or opera business. I think it's really ideas, especially if the person like plants.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答较为自然,但句子结构稍显简单,且部分表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并丰富细节描述。

Exemplo: Yes, I keep a couple of green plants in my living room to decorate the space. They are not too fancy, but they really help me relax and improve my concentration when I study.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致,使用正确的词汇,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I grew beans in primary school for a science project. We planted small pots, watered them every day, and watched the beans slowly sprout. It was a very interesting experience for me.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答内容基本完整,但语法和表达有误。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I know some basic things about growing plants, such as they need sufficient sunlight, water, and suitable soil. Although I don't know much, I often watch my mother gardening, which helps me learn more.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子,注意单复数和时态,增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, people in China do give plants as gifts, but it is not very common. Usually, friends or family give plants like bamboo or orchids, especially when someone moves into a new home or opens a business. I think it's a thoughtful idea, especially if the person likes plants.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× We planned these small pilots, waters them every day and watching them slowly sprout.

We planted these small plants, watered them every day and watched them slowly sprout.

句中动词时态不一致,描述过去的动作应全部用过去式。'planned'应为'planted'(种植),'waters'应为'watered','watching'应为'watched'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It was such an interesting and experience for me.

It was such an interesting experience for me.

'interesting'是形容词,'experience'是名词,二者之间不需要连词'and',应直接修饰名词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I know some basic knowledge such as factors the plants need, sufficient sunlight, water and suitable soil.

I know some basic knowledge such as the factors plants need: sufficient sunlight, water and suitable soil.

缺少定冠词'the'来限定特定的因素,且'plants'前不需要定冠词。

Incorrect use of verb + -ing form

× sometimes I just watching her doing it.

sometimes I just watch her doing it.

'just'后应接动词原形,'watching'应改为'watch'。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, people in China do give plants, but it's not that coming.

Yes, people in China do give plants, but it's not that common.

'coming'是动词,句中应使用形容词'common'表示'常见'。

Singular and plural issue

× Usually it's friends or family giving like the bamboo or orchids.

Usually it's friends or family giving plants like bamboo or orchids.

缺少名词'plants','bamboo'和'orchids'是植物名词,前面不需要定冠词'the'。

Incorrect use of verb + -ing form

× Like when someone move into the new home or opera business.

Like when someone moves into a new home or opens a business.

'someone'为第三人称单数,动词应加-s变为'moves','opera business'应为'opens a business'更符合表达。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it's really ideas, especially if the person like plants.

I think it's really a good idea, especially if the person likes plants.

'ideas'应为单数'a good idea','person'为第三人称单数,动词应为'likes'。

Vocabulário

InterestingAbsorbing
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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