Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိရန် ပိုမိုတိုးတက်စေရန် အဓိကအချက်ကို ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစွာ ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "plants" နှင့် "plant" စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် သတိပြုပါ။

Exemplo: I don't keep many plants at home because I find it difficult to take care of them. However, my father enjoys gardening and grows many flowers in our garden.

Sugestão: အဖြေတွင် သင်၏အတွေ့အကြုံကို ပိုမိုသေချာစွာ ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "cherry" နှင့် "scolds" စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် သတိပြုပါ။

Exemplo: Although I wasn't good at planting, I had to grow a plant in high school as part of the curriculum. I planted a cherry tree in front of my school.

Sugestão: အဖြေကို ပိုမိုသဘာဝကျပြီး စာလုံးပေါင်းမှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "grade sevens" ကို "seventh grade" ဟု ပြင်ဆင်ပါ။

Exemplo: Yes, I know a little about growing plants because in seventh grade, my teacher, who was good at gardening, taught us how to graft two different species into one plant.

Sugestão: အဖြေတွင် စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "chin" ကို "Chinese" ဟု၊ "firm" ကို "farm" ဟု ပြင်ဆင်ပါ။

Exemplo: Yes, it is quite common for Chinese people to send plants as gifts, especially to relatives. This tradition is more popular in rural areas where people have large gardens and farms with various seeds to share.

× Well honestly I'm not really good at keeping plant especially flowers because it's quite hard for me to take cares of them.

✓ Well honestly I'm not really good at keeping plants especially flowers because it's quite hard for me to take care of them.

The word 'plant' should be plural 'plants' because it refers to more than one plant in general. Also, 'take cares' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take care' without 's'. This is a common pluralization and verb form error.

× But my dad like plants so he plant a lot of flowers in our home.

✓ But my dad likes plants so he plants a lot of flowers in our home.

In the present simple tense, when the subject is third person singular (he, she, it), the verb must have an 's' at the end. Therefore, 'like' should be 'likes' and 'plant' should be 'plants'.

× Even though that I'm not good at planting, I still have to do it when I was in my high school.

✓ Even though I'm not good at planting, I still had to do it when I was in high school.

The phrase 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to match the past time reference 'when I was in high school'. Also, 'my high school' is better as 'high school' in this context.

× It is a curriculum so every student have to plant at least one.

✓ It is a curriculum so every student has to plant at least one.

The subject 'every student' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Therefore I plant cherry in front of my scolds.

✓ Therefore I planted a cherry tree in front of my school.

'Cherry' should be 'a cherry tree' to specify the plant. Also, 'scolds' is incorrect; the intended word is 'school'. The verb 'plant' should be in past tense 'planted' to match the past context.

× Therefore I plant cherry in front of my scolds.

✓ Therefore I planted a cherry tree in front of my school.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'planted' instead of present tense 'plant'.

× Yeah, I know a little bit about how to grow a plant because in my grade sevens, my teacher was good at planting and he shared some of his knowledge how to plant, uh, two different species into one that's.

✓ Yeah, I know a little bit about how to grow a plant because in grade seven, my teacher was good at planting and he shared some of his knowledge about how to plant, uh, two different species into one.

'Grade sevens' should be 'grade seven' as it refers to a single grade level. Also, 'shared some of his knowledge how to plant' is missing the preposition 'about'. The sentence is in past tense, so 'was' and 'shared' are correct.

× he shared some of his knowledge how to plant, uh, two different species into one that's.

✓ he shared some of his knowledge about how to plant, uh, two different species into one.

The phrase 'knowledge how to plant' requires the preposition 'about' to be grammatically correct: 'knowledge about how to plant'.

× Uh yes, it's quiet famous for chin people to send plants as gift, especially to our relative Umm.

✓ Uh yes, it's quite famous for Chinese people to send plants as gifts, especially to our relatives.

'Chin people' should be 'Chinese people'. 'Quiet' is a misspelling of 'quite'. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to plants in plural. 'Relative' should be plural 'relatives' to match the context.

× It's most common in rural area because they have a big garden and firm so they have different kinds of seed to share.

✓ It's most common in rural areas because they have big gardens and farms so they have different kinds of seeds to share.

'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to generalize. 'Firm' is a misspelling of 'farm'. 'Garden' and 'farm' should be plural to match 'they have'. 'Seed' should be plural 'seeds' because it refers to multiple kinds.