Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use correct vocabulary ('plants' instead of 'plans') and structure your answer to be more concise and natural. Also, avoid filler words and ensure the answer is coherent.

Exemplo: I live in a small apartment in Dubai, so I don't keep plants at home due to limited space. Although I would like to have some, it's not practical for me right now.

Sugestão: Try to combine sentences using linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'just attracts me a lot' and be more specific about your feelings or reasons.

Exemplo: When I was young, I used to plant many flowers, especially Sampaguita, which is the national flower of the Philippines. I loved it because of its pleasant smell and beautiful white color.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete or confusing sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about what you know.

Exemplo: Since my grandfather is a farmer and my mother enjoys planting flowers, I have learned a little about growing plants. For example, I know they need regular care, such as watering and proper sunlight.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence coherence by using linking words. Also, be more specific and avoid vague statements like 'most of it are flowers'.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese people send plants, especially flowers, as gifts because they appreciate beauty and consider flowers a meaningful present.

× I I live in a small apartment in Dubai so I don't have plans at home although I wanted to but because of the limited space I'm not able to keep it and so I don't have any plans to come.

✓ I live in a small apartment in Dubai so I don't have plants at home although I wanted to but because of the limited space I'm not able to keep them and so I don't have any plants at home.

The word 'plans' is incorrect; it should be 'plants' to refer to living plants. Also, 'keep it' should be 'keep them' because 'plants' is plural. The phrase 'I don't have any plans to come' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'I don't have any plants at home' to maintain the context.

× Yes, some Chinese people send plants as gifts and most of it are flowers.

✓ Yes, some Chinese people send plants as gifts and most of them are flowers.

The phrase 'most of it are flowers' is incorrect because 'it' is singular while referring to plural 'plants'. It should be 'most of them are flowers' to agree in number.