PlantsPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you keep plants at home?

Candidato

No, I have no idea on growing plants, but my mom likes plants very much and there are many indoor plants in my home for decoration. But to be honest I don't know much about their names and characteristics.

Examinador

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Candidato

I grew mimosa when I was a child. They are very sensitive because their lives quickly filled up when I touch them. They are easily to be grown and I didn't have any other opportunities to grow other types of flowers.

Examinador

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Candidato

Yes, I know plants have different growing habits. For example, some prefer to the sunshine while others can survive in dark environments. However, I only have basic knowledge about plants and I'm not familiar with more detailed information.

Examinador

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Candidato

Chinese people often send flowers as gifts because they carry special meanings such as good luck and prosperity. When I was a child, my mom sent me some flowers and she helped me to grow up like these flowers.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免重复表达,如“have no idea on growing plants”和“don't know much about their names and characteristics”意思重复。可以直接表达自己不养植物,但家里有很多植物装饰。

Exemplo: No, I don't keep plants myself, but my mother loves them and has many indoor plants at home for decoration.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“their lives quickly filled up”不清楚意思,应改为“their leaves quickly close when touched”。建议用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I grew mimosa plants. They are very sensitive because their leaves quickly close when touched. They are easy to grow, and I didn't have the chance to grow other flowers.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答较好,但“prefer to the sunshine”表达不准确,应为“prefer sunshine”。建议增加更多具体细节,使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I know that plants have different growing habits. For example, some prefer sunshine, while others can survive in darker environments. However, my knowledge is quite basic, and I am not familiar with more detailed information.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答内容相关但表达不够自然,最后一句“she helped me to grow up like these flowers”不太恰当。建议用更贴切的比喻或直接表达。

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese people often give flowers as gifts because they symbolize good luck and prosperity. For example, my mother gave me flowers when I was a child, which made me feel cared for and loved.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× No, I have no idea on growing plants, but my mom likes plants very much and there are many indoor plants in my home for decoration.

No, I have no idea about growing plants, but my mom likes plants very much and there are many indoor plants in my home for decoration.

介词短语中应使用介词“about”而不是“on”,因为“have no idea about”是固定搭配,表示“对……没有了解”。

Singular and plural issue

× I grew mimosa when I was a child. They are very sensitive because their lives quickly filled up when I touch them.

I grew mimosa when I was a child. It is very sensitive because its leaves quickly fold up when I touch it.

“mimosa”是单数名词,代词应使用单数形式“it”和“its”。“lives”应为“leaves”,且“fold up”是含义正确的表达。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× They are easily to be grown and I didn't have any other opportunities to grow other types of flowers.

They are easy to grow and I didn't have any other opportunities to grow other types of flowers.

“easy”是形容词,修饰动词不定式时用“easy to do”,而不是“easily to be grown”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For example, some prefer to the sunshine while others can survive in dark environments.

For example, some prefer sunshine while others can survive in dark environments.

动词“prefer”后直接接名词,不需要介词“to”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× When I was a child, my mom sent me some flowers and she helped me to grow up like these flowers.

When I was a child, my mom sent me some flowers and she helped me grow up like these flowers.

动词“help”后接动词原形,不需要“to”。

Vocabulário

DarkBlack; Mysterious; Brunette; Gloomy; Evil
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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