Stories— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by avoiding repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to use more varied vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I remember', you can use linking phrases like 'In addition' or 'Moreover'. Also, correct small mistakes such as 'before I go to sleep' to 'before I went to sleep'.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I enjoyed listening to stories every night when I was a child. In addition, I often asked my mother to tell me tales before I went to sleep. I also loved reading storybooks, and I was usually good at answering story-related questions in class.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct articles ('a hobby'), avoid redundancy ('a some spare time' should be 'some spare time'), and use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your expressions.

Exemplo: I enjoy both listening to stories and reading them. Reading books is one of my hobbies that I do whenever I have some spare time. However, when I was young, I used to listen to my mother's tales at night, which helped me sleep peacefully.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. To improve, try to organize your answer logically with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your story is complete and coherent. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, 'a thirsty crow story' and 'to get water through the pot'.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I wrote many stories for my English class. For example, I once wrote a story about a thirsty crow who struggled to get water from a pot. He cleverly dropped stones into the pot to raise the water level and finally drank it.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct relative pronouns ('stories that give me life experience'), avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your expression.

Exemplo: I enjoy motivational and problem-solving stories, especially those that teach valuable life lessons. For instance, my mother used to tell me a story about a farmer who struggled to achieve success but eventually succeeded through hard work and perseverance.

× I enjoy stories every night.

✓ I enjoy stories every night.

No correction needed here as 'stories' is correctly plural to match the context.

× I remember that I always asked my mother to tell me stories before I go to sleep.

✓ I remember that I always asked my mother to tell me stories before I went to sleep.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to maintain consistency with the past tense 'asked' in the sentence.

× I also love reading stories in the books.

✓ I also love reading stories in books.

The phrase 'in the books' is incorrect because 'books' is a general plural noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'.

× I remember that I was always good in the stories questionnaires in the class.

✓ I remember that I was always good at the stories questionnaires in class.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' is 'at' not 'in'. Also, 'in the class' should be 'in class' for natural phrasing.

× Reading books is one of my hobby which I do whenever I have a some spare time.

✓ Reading books is one of my hobbies which I do whenever I have some spare time.

'Hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it is preceded by 'one of my', which requires a plural noun. Also, 'a some' is incorrect; 'some' alone is sufficient.

× On the other hand, when I was young, I used to listen to the tales from my mother during night, so to have a delightful sleeping.

✓ On the other hand, when I was young, I used to listen to tales from my mother during the night, to have a delightful sleep.

'During night' should be 'during the night' to specify the time. 'A delightful sleeping' is incorrect; 'sleeping' is a gerund and does not fit here. The noun 'sleep' is correct.

× Yes, I, when I was young, I used to have a lot of stories in my syllabus.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I used to have a lot of stories in my syllabus.

The sentence has unnecessary repetition of 'I'. Removing the extra 'I' improves clarity and correctness.

× When we had a test in English, I, I wrote, uh, thirsty gross story.

✓ When we had a test in English, I wrote a thirsty crow story.

The phrase 'thirsty gross story' is likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'thirsty crow story'. Also, remove repeated 'I' and filler words for clarity.

× It was a story of a crow who struggled to get a water in through the pot.

✓ It was a story of a crow who struggled to get water into the pot.

'A water' is incorrect because 'water' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. 'In through the pot' is awkward; 'into the pot' is the correct preposition.

× So he put some stones in the pot and got.

✓ So he put some stones in the pot and got the water.

The sentence is incomplete; it should specify what he got after putting stones in the pot.

× I always enjoy motivational and problem solving stories, for instance, the stories who can give me a life experience.

✓ I always enjoy motivational and problem-solving stories, for instance, stories that can give me life experience.

'Stories who' is incorrect; 'stories that' is correct for things. Also, 'problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving'. 'A life experience' is better as 'life experience' in this context.

× I would love to hear to those stories when my mom used to tell me a story of a farmer who always struggled to get success and then he got success.

✓ I would love to hear those stories; my mom used to tell me a story of a farmer who always struggled to achieve success and then succeeded.

'Hear to' is incorrect; it should be 'hear'. The sentence is run-on and should be split for clarity. 'Get success' is unnatural; 'achieve success' or 'succeed' is better.