Stories— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь давать более структурированный ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте пару конкретных деталей и одну короткую причину. Уберите повторения и разговорные сбои (например, повторы «my my», «for example» несколько раз). Также следите за грамматикой (past simple: "my mum used to bring me books").

Exemplo: Yes, I loved stories as a child. I often read fairy tales and adventure books, and my mum used to bring me a new book every night. They sparked my imagination and encouraged me to dream up my own adventures.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо и полно: сначала укажите предпочтение, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте неоконченных фраз и повторов («it depends» дважды в одной короткой ответе). Сформулируйте мысль грамматически верно ("I prefer reading non-fiction because...").

Exemplo: It depends, but I usually prefer reading non-fiction stories because I can learn detailed information and reflect at my own pace. For example, I enjoy reading biographies to understand how people solved problems.

Sugestão: Давайте чёткую структуру: утвердительное предложение, конкретный пример и одна-две детали о процессе или результате. Избегайте повторов («I remember» несколько раз) и нечетких фраз («something like that»). Исправьте грамматику ("it was very exciting", "I used my imagination").

Exemplo: Yes, I wrote an adventure story for a school project when I was ten. It was very exciting to create the plot and characters, and I used my imagination to describe dangerous journeys and hidden islands.

Sugestão: Будьте конкретнее и логичнее: начните с общего утверждения о предпочтениях, затем перечислите один-два жанра с коротким объяснением, почему они вам нравятся. Избегайте неясных выражений («family traumas») без пояснения и повторов («feel that feeling»).

Exemplo: I mainly enjoy romantic and adventure novels. I like romance because it explores relationships and emotions, and adventure stories because they are exciting and full of unexpected events.

× Yes, I loved stories when I was a child and they sparked my imagination and for example I often read fairy tales and adventure books and my my mom every night brought me books.

✓ Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. They sparked my imagination. For example, I often read fairy tales and adventure books, and my mom brought me books every night.

The original contains run-on sentences and incorrect word order for past habitual action. Break into shorter sentences and use simple past consistently ('loved', 'sparked', 'read', 'brought'). Place frequency phrase 'every night' after the verb phrase 'brought me books' for natural word order. Remove duplicate 'my'. Suggested improvement: practise sentence boundaries and placing time/frequency expressions after the main verb in past tense.

× Well it depends what kind of story it is. I prefer reading non fiction stories to learn more about them and if it's and it depends on my mood also.

✓ Well, it depends on what kind of story it is. I prefer reading nonfiction to learn more about topics, but it also depends on my mood.

Problems: incorrect preposition ('depends on'), awkward phrase repetition and sentence fragment 'if it's and it depends'. Use 'depends on' for dependence, remove redundant words, and use 'but' to contrast. 'Nonfiction' as one word is standard. Improve coherence by joining clauses correctly. Suggested improvement: focus on 'depends on' structure and avoid repeating phrases; practice linking contrasting ideas with 'but' or 'however'.

× Yes, absolutely. I remember, I remember when I remember I wrote this adventure story for the school project and it was very excited and really interesting to use my imagination and something like that.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I remember when I wrote an adventure story for a school project; it was very exciting and really interesting to use my imagination.

Errors: unnecessary repetition 'I remember' and incorrect adjective 'excited' to describe the story (use 'exciting'). Use 'wrote' for past action and 'an' before 'adventure story'. Remove vague 'and something like that'. Use a semicolon or separate sentence to improve clarity. Suggested improvement: avoid repeating phrases, choose appropriate adjectives ('exciting' for describing something, 'excited' for a person), and be specific rather than using fillers.

× I enjoy reading and romantic and adventurous books, for example family traumas and romantic stories to feel that feeling and.

✓ I enjoy reading romantic and adventurous books; for example, family dramas and romantic stories help me feel those emotions.

Problems: incorrect conjunctions and word order ('reading and romantic and adventurous books'), wrong noun 'traumas' instead of 'dramas', awkward phrase 'to feel that feeling', and trailing 'and'. Reorder as 'reading romantic and adventurous books', use 'family dramas', and rephrase 'to feel those emotions' for clarity. Suggested improvement: learn correct collocation ('family dramas'), avoid repeating conjunctions unnecessarily, and replace vague phrases with specific expressions.