Colours— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'.

Exemplo: My favorite colour is white because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. Additionally, white is a pastel colour that suits my personality and makes me feel comfortable when I wear it.

Sugestão: Try to form complete sentences and avoid awkward phrasing. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I dislike the colour gray because it looks dull to me. Therefore, I would never choose gray for my room walls as it makes the space feel gloomy.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Exemplo: My friends like different colours. Some prefer bright colours, while others like light shades. For example, one friend likes green and sky blue because they remind him of nature.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to speak clearly and organize your thoughts. Use linking words to explain why certain colours make you uncomfortable.

Exemplo: Dark brown and very bright colours make me uncomfortable in my room because they are too intense. I prefer pastel colours like light pink and light yellow because they create a calm atmosphere.

× One more reason I because it's comfortable and is that is 1 pastel colour and it's also enhance my personality when I wear wear it and also I.

✓ One more reason is that it's comfortable and it is a pastel colour, and it also enhances my personality when I wear it.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure errors, making it unclear. 'One more reason I because' is incorrect; it should be 'One more reason is that'. Also, 'is that is 1 pastel colour' is incorrect and should be 'it is a pastel colour'. The verb 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Repetition of 'wear' and the incomplete ending 'and also I' should be removed for clarity.

× I dislike the Gray color because according to me it's look like a dull and I never want to be Gray color on my room walls and so no.

✓ I dislike the gray colour because, according to me, it looks dull and I never want gray colour on my room walls.

The pronoun 'it's' should be 'it' and the verb 'look' should be 'looks' to agree with the singular subject. 'A dull' is incorrect; 'dull' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'I never want to be Gray color on my room walls' is incorrect; it should be 'I never want gray colour on my room walls'. The phrase 'and so no' is unclear and unnecessary, so it is removed.

× On my Halifax heavy and different size they someone likes a bright colour and one others like a light shades and one of his friends like the green and sky blue because they think it is connected to the nature and the most of all this is accessories in a person name blue.

✓ Among my friends, some like bright colours, others like light shades, and one friend likes green and sky blue because they think these colours are connected to nature. Most of all, blue is a popular colour in accessories.

The original sentence is confusing and has sentence structure errors. 'On my Halifax heavy and different size they someone likes' is unclear and incorrect. It is corrected to 'Among my friends, some like bright colours'. 'One others' should be 'others'. 'Like the green and sky blue' should be 'likes green and sky blue'. 'Connected to the nature' should be 'connected to nature'. The last part is unclear and is rephrased to 'Most of all, blue is a popular colour in accessories' for clarity.

× I'm pretty, uh, I'm playing, uh, dark brown and one more brighter colors can be make my room very like, uh, eye-catching, but I think and pastel color and light You like bees, bees, bees light pink, light yellow.

✓ I prefer dark brown and some brighter colours that can make my room very eye-catching, but I also like pastel colours like light pink and light yellow.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and is fragmented. 'I'm pretty, uh, I'm playing' is unclear and corrected to 'I prefer'. 'One more brighter colors can be make' is incorrect; it should be 'some brighter colours that can make'. 'But I think and pastel color and light You like bees, bees, bees light pink, light yellow' is unclear and corrected to 'but I also like pastel colours like light pink and light yellow' for clarity and correctness.