Part 1
Examinador
What's your favorite colour?
Candidato
I quite like black and white color. I think it is the basic color and I can mix and match so many things of this color. For example, when I want to choose a outfit to go out I I usually choose two of this color.
Examinador
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Candidato
We don't have any color which I don't like, but for outfit I don't like some colorful color like red meat with a green or blue something, something like that, because I think it's colorful and and it's not fit on me, I choose.
Examinador
What colours do your friends like most?
Candidato
I have so many friends among them like colorful color and some of them choose color fit down number of logic because they believe that to the fit color fitting color is a items of luckily and I hope so.
Examinador
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Candidato
I don't really dislike any color. So I think even though in my room the car by any color, I still feel comfortable. Yeah, but sometimes when my down, when I download, I don't like something so colorful in my room.
What's your favorite colour?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'colors' thay vì 'color' khi nói về nhiều màu. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: My favorite colors are black and white because they are basic and versatile. I can easily mix and match clothes in these colors. For instance, when I go out, I usually choose outfits that combine black and white.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói vòng vo. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'red meat'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, có liên kết logic.
Exemplo: I don't dislike any color in general, but for clothes, I avoid bright colors like red or green because I feel they don't suit me well.
What colours do your friends like most?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.
Exemplo: My friends like many different colors. Some prefer bright colors because they believe wearing the right color can bring good luck.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như 'car by' hay 'download'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: I don't dislike any color in my room, so I usually feel comfortable. However, sometimes I don't like very bright or colorful decorations because they can be distracting.
× I quite like black and white color.
✓ I quite like black and white colors.
The word 'color' should be plural 'colors' because it refers to two different colors, black and white, which are countable and plural in this context.
× I can mix and match so many things of this color.
✓ I can mix and match so many things of these colors.
Since 'black and white' refers to two colors, the demonstrative pronoun should be plural 'these' and 'colors' should be plural to match.
× when I want to choose a outfit to go out I I usually choose two of this color.
✓ when I want to choose an outfit to go out I usually choose two of these colors.
The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'outfit'. Also, 'this color' should be plural 'these colors' to refer to black and white.
× We don't have any color which I don't like, but for outfit I don't like some colorful color like red meat with a green or blue something, something like that, because I think it's colorful and and it's not fit on me, I choose.
✓ We don't have any color that I don't like, but for outfits I don't like some colorful colors like red mixed with green or blue, something like that, because I think it's colorful and it doesn't suit me.
'Color' should be plural 'colors' when referring to multiple colors. 'Meat' is incorrect and should be 'mixed'. 'Fit on me' is incorrect; 'suit me' is the correct phrase.
× I have so many friends among them like colorful color and some of them choose color fit down number of logic because they believe that to the fit color fitting color is a items of luckily and I hope so.
✓ I have so many friends; among them, some like colorful colors and some of them choose colors based on logic because they believe that the right color is a matter of luck, and I hope so.
'Colorful color' should be 'colorful colors'. 'Color fit down number of logic' is unclear and corrected to 'choose colors based on logic'. 'Items of luckily' is incorrect and changed to 'a matter of luck'.
× I don't really dislike any color. So I think even though in my room the car by any color, I still feel comfortable.
✓ I don't really dislike any color. So I think even though in my room the car is any color, I still feel comfortable.
The word 'car' seems to be a typo for 'color'. The phrase 'the car by any color' is incorrect; it should be 'the color is any color' or better 'the color is whatever'.
× Yeah, but sometimes when my down, when I download, I don't like something so colorful in my room.
✓ Yeah, but sometimes when I'm down, I don't like something so colorful in my room.
'When my down' and 'when I download' are incorrect. The correct phrase is 'when I'm down' meaning feeling sad or low.