Part 1
Examinador
What's your favorite colour?
Candidato
My favorite color is blue because blue can make me crunch in some examinations. One more blood. I will buy some blue T-shirt in the SU because in the summer stage it can avoid the harmful UV ride and make me feel cold.
Examinador
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Candidato
It is true that I don't really like purple because you know it. In Chinese traditional culture, purple symbolize the die Thought I'm I will avoid to use some purposes items in my daily life.
Examinador
What colours do your friends like most?
Candidato
I didn't know about it because I never asked my friend but I think my friend will be like the white colour most because maybe white colored can acts their outfit more easily. He's wear the white T-shirt every day.
Examinador
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Candidato
Maybe it is some dark colored. I think dark colored may feels uncomfortable. You will feel a distraction when you saw the discarded. I will choose like the white color to decorate my house. It will sort me comfortable.
What's your favorite colour?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子表达观点,避免使用不准确的词汇,并且注意句子结构的完整性。
Exemplo: My favorite color is blue because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. I also like to wear blue T-shirts in summer because they help me feel cooler and protect me from the sun.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答中表达不清且语法错误较多,建议你明确表达对紫色的看法,并且用完整的句子说明原因,避免使用模糊和不连贯的表达。
Exemplo: I don't like the color purple because in Chinese traditional culture, it symbolizes death. Therefore, I try to avoid using purple items in my daily life.
What colours do your friends like most?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答缺乏直接性和逻辑性,建议你直接回答问题,并用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅,同时注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
Exemplo: I am not sure about my friends' favorite colors because I haven't asked them. However, I think many of them like white because it is easy to match with other clothes. For example, one of my friends wears a white T-shirt almost every day.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议你用更准确的词汇表达颜色和感受,并且用连词连接句子,使表达更自然流畅。
Exemplo: Dark colors make me feel uncomfortable in my room because they can be distracting. I prefer to decorate my house with white color because it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.
× My favorite color is blue because blue can make me crunch in some examinations.
✓ My favorite color is blue because blue can help me concentrate in some examinations.
这里的'crunch'用错了,应该用'concentrate'表示专注。虽然不是严格的单复数错误,但原句中动词用法不当,影响表达。
× I will buy some blue T-shirt in the SU because in the summer stage it can avoid the harmful UV ride and make me feel cold.
✓ I will buy some blue T-shirts at the SU because in the summer it can protect me from harmful UV rays and make me feel cool.
介词'in'用错,应该用'at'表示地点。'T-shirt'应为复数形式。'UV ride'应为'UV rays'。'make me feel cold'应为'make me feel cool',表示凉爽。
× I will buy some blue T-shirt in the SU because in the summer stage it can avoid the harmful UV ride and make me feel cold.
✓ I will buy some blue T-shirts at the SU because in the summer it can protect me from harmful UV rays and make me feel cool.
'T-shirt'应使用复数形式's',因为前面有'some'表示复数。
× In Chinese traditional culture, purple symbolize the die Thought I'm I will avoid to use some purposes items in my daily life.
✓ In Chinese traditional culture, purple symbolizes death. Therefore, I avoid using some purple items in my daily life.
'symbolize'应为第三人称单数'symbolizes','die Thought'应为'death','avoid to use'应为'avoid using',介词用法错误。
× In Chinese traditional culture, purple symbolize the die Thought I'm I will avoid to use some purposes items in my daily life.
✓ In Chinese traditional culture, purple symbolizes death. Therefore, I avoid using some purple items in my daily life.
主语'purple'是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加's',即'symbolizes'。
× I will avoid to use some purposes items in my daily life.
✓ I avoid using some purple items in my daily life.
'avoid'后应接动名词形式'using',而不是不定式'to use'。
× I didn't know about it because I never asked my friend but I think my friend will be like the white colour most because maybe white colored can acts their outfit more easily.
✓ I don't know about it because I have never asked my friend, but I think my friend likes white the most because white color can match their outfit more easily.
时态错误,'didn't know'应为现在时'don't know','never asked'应为现在完成时'have never asked'。'acts'应为'acts'的第三人称单数形式'acts',但这里应为'match'。
× maybe white colored can acts their outfit more easily.
✓ maybe white color can match their outfit more easily.
主语'white color'是第三人称单数,谓语动词应为单数形式。这里'acts'用错,应为'match'。
× He's wear the white T-shirt every day.
✓ He wears a white T-shirt every day.
'He's'应为'He','wear'应为第三人称单数'wears','the white T-shirt'改为'a white T-shirt'更自然。
× Maybe it is some dark colored.
✓ Maybe it is some dark colors.
'colored'应为'noun'形式'colors',表示颜色。
× I think dark colored may feels uncomfortable.
✓ I think dark colors may feel uncomfortable.
'dark colored'应为'dark colors','feels'应为'feel'与复数主语一致。
× You will feel a distraction when you saw the discarded.
✓ You will feel distracted when you see the dark colors.
'a distraction'用错,应为形容词'distracted'。'saw'应为现在时'see','discarded'用错,应为'dark colors'。
× I will choose like the white color to decorate my house.
✓ I will choose white color to decorate my house.
'choose like'用法错误,应该直接用'choose'。
× It will sort me comfortable.
✓ It will make me feel comfortable.
'sort me comfortable'用法错误,应为'make me feel comfortable'。