Colours— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số từ không tự nhiên như "inspirable" và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết.

Exemplo: My favorite colour is navy blue because it looks vivid and calming. I often see it in clothes and advertisements, which makes me feel inspired.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "heels" thay vì "hues" hoặc "colours". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

Exemplo: I dislike murky yellow because it looks dull and unpleasant. It reminds me of something dirty, so I find it quite disgusting.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng nên tránh nói về bản thân không liên quan đến câu hỏi. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: My friends mostly like emerald green because it is vivid and vibrant. They often choose clothes and accessories in this colour.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và lặp từ. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp lại ý và chú ý ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: I feel uncomfortable with murky yellow in my room because it looks unpleasant. I prefer my room to be a safe and comfortable place.

× My favorite tone of colour on the spectrum wheel must be a saturated Navy because it feels really vivid and inspirable every time I see it in a piece of clothing or advertisement videos.

✓ My favorite tone of colour on the spectrum wheel must be a saturated Navy because it feels really vivid and inspiring every time I see it in a piece of clothing or advertisement videos.

The word 'inspirable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'inspiring' to describe something that causes inspiration.

× I would definitely get into it and watch it till the end.

✓ I would definitely get into it and watch it to the end.

The phrase 'watch it till the end' is informal; 'to the end' is more appropriate in formal contexts.

× There are actually a lot of different heels that I don't enjoy, For example, a murky and sickly yellow.

✓ There are actually a lot of different hues that I don't enjoy, for example, a murky and sickly yellow.

The word 'heels' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'hues' meaning colors or shades.

× It just feels really uninspirable and it's just, and it's just feel like someone's litter.

✓ It just feels really uninspiring and it just feels like someone's litter.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect verb form; 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the subject 'it' and redundant phrases should be removed for clarity.

× So that would be really disgusting for me.

✓ So that would be really disgusting to me.

The correct preposition to express personal feeling is 'to me' rather than 'for me'.

× I see them tend to gravitate towards emerald colored items.

✓ I see that they tend to gravitate towards emerald-colored items.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect as the subject; 'they' is correct. Also, 'emerald colored' should be hyphenated as 'emerald-colored'.

× Perhaps they are really vivid and vibrant for them.

✓ Perhaps they are really vivid and vibrant to them.

The correct preposition to express perception or feeling is 'to' rather than 'for'.

× As I previously mentioned, I dislike the color that is looks disgusting such as a murky yellow.

✓ As I previously mentioned, I dislike the color that looks disgusting, such as a murky yellow.

The phrase 'that is looks' is incorrect; it should be 'that looks' to maintain correct verb agreement.

× So definitely I don't want this color to be in my room because it's just makes me feel really uncomfortable and unsafe at the same time.

✓ So definitely I don't want this color to be in my room because it just makes me feel really uncomfortable and unsafe at the same time.

The phrase 'it's just makes me' is incorrect; 'it just makes me' is correct without the contraction 'it's'.

× I want my room to be a safe place and a comfort zone.

✓ I want my room to be a safe place and a comfortable zone.

The word 'comfort' is a noun; the adjective form 'comfortable' should be used to describe 'zone'.