Colours— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons why green is your favorite color, such as its calming effect or association with nature's beauty.

Exemplo: My favorite color is green because it reminds me of nature, like mountains and rivers, which I enjoy visiting. Additionally, green has a calming effect and is often associated with health and freshness.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases like 'gorilla garish color.' Instead, clearly explain why you dislike pink, and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I dislike the color pink because I find it too bright and flashy for my taste. However, I think pink suits young girls well, as it looks cute and pretty on them.

Sugestão: Clarify your sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of why your friends prefer white, such as its modern and minimalistic appeal.

Exemplo: Most of my friends prefer white, especially for their home interiors. Their furniture and decorations are all white, which gives a modern and minimalistic look that I also admire.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'the proper or some bright color.' Use clear topic sentences and linking words to explain why bright colors make you uncomfortable and why darker colors help you relax and focus.

Exemplo: Bright colors make me uncomfortable in my room because I prefer a calm atmosphere. Darker colors like brown or black help me feel relaxed and focused when I'm at home.

× these natural places has a lot of green

✓ these natural places have a lot of green

The subject 'places' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× The color I dislike is the pink because which is really a gorilla garish color

✓ The color I dislike is pink because it is really a garish color

'Pink' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'. Also, 'which' is incorrectly used; 'it' should be used as the subject of the clause. 'Gorilla' seems to be a mispronunciation or error and should be removed.

× I'm not big fan of the color

✓ I'm not a big fan of the color

The phrase 'big fan' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× So I like the girls who likes pinks because they are really cute and pretty

✓ So I like the girls who like pink because they are really cute and pretty

The verb 'like' should agree with the plural subject 'girls'. Also, 'pinks' is incorrect; 'pink' as a color is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× My friends like the whites is my white the most one of my friends like uh, white

✓ My friends like white the most; one of my friends likes white

'Whites' is incorrect as 'white' as a color is uncountable. Also, 'one of my friends likes' requires the singular verb 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'one'.

× they're furnitures or something interior in their house is everything is white

✓ their furniture or interior in their house is all white

'Furniture' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'furnitures'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× So I like them their styles as well

✓ So I like their styles as well

'Them their' is redundant; only 'their' is needed to indicate possession.

× I like to go to the this place

✓ I like to go to this place

'The' and 'this' should not be used together; 'this' already specifies the noun.

× which is really relaxed for me and I want to stay focused

✓ which is really relaxing for me and I want to stay focused

'Relaxed' describes a feeling experienced by a person, but here the color causes relaxation, so 'relaxing' (present participle) is correct.