Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте неясных выражений, таких как "30,000 thing", и старайтесь использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также избегайте излишней информации, которая не относится к вопросу.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts, especially to children. I usually choose books or nice clothes for them. For example, recently I bought some books for a two-year-old son of my close friends, which I think he will enjoy.

Sugestão: Ответ следует сделать более связным и логичным, используя связующие слова. Также стоит уточнить детали, чтобы ответ был более конкретным и естественным.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts even without special occasions, for example, if we haven't met for a month or more. Although the gifts are small and inexpensive, I try to make people happy. For instance, recently I wrote a small book for a child.

Sugestão: Ответ хороший, но стоит улучшить грамматику и связность, особенно в последнем предложении. Используйте более точные выражения и связывающие слова.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I usually consider the person's interests and preferences. For example, a month ago my close friend mentioned she had never tried a pottery class, so I bought her a certificate to enjoy the class with her daughter and other friends.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует улучшить структуру предложения и использовать связующие слова для ясности.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy giving handmade gifts. For example, one of my students gave me a meaningful gift last year, so I wanted to respond by giving her hand-embroidered hair clips and hair bows.

Sugestão: Ответ нужно сделать более связным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте разрывов в предложениях и используйте связующие слова для логики.

Exemplo: In my opinion, expensive gifts can better express feelings, but not everyone appreciates them. For example, last summer I gave hair clips to a close friend, but I don't think she liked them because I have never seen her using them.

× I like choosing books, expensive clothes for them.

✓ I like choosing books and expensive clothes for them.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction between 'books' and 'expensive clothes', which makes the list incomplete. Adding 'and' correctly connects the plural nouns, improving clarity.

× they have a son who is only two years old and I bought him books for 30,000 thing.

✓ they have a son who is only two years old and I bought him books worth 30,000 tugriks.

The phrase 'books for 30,000 thing' is unclear and incorrect. It should specify the currency or unit, such as 'worth 30,000 tugriks'. This clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I really enjoy giving gifts, especially for kids.

✓ I really enjoy giving gifts, especially to kids.

The verb 'enjoy giving gifts' is followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the recipient. Using 'for' is incorrect in this context.

× Even if this gift is not expensive and small, I always try to make happy people.

✓ Even if this gift is not expensive and is small, I always try to make people happy.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'not expensive and small' without parallel structure. Also, 'make happy people' should be 'make people happy' to follow correct English word order.

× I wrote one small book for a child.

✓ I wrote a small book for a child.

The article 'one' is less natural here; 'a small book' is the correct and more common expression.

× my close friend mentioned about the pottery class that she has never been there before

✓ my close friend mentioned the pottery class that she has never been to before

The verb 'mention' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'been there' should be 'been to' when referring to attending a place or class.

× so I decided to buy a certificate for her so she could enjoy it with her daughter were with her other close friends.

✓ so I decided to buy a certificate for her so she could enjoy it with her daughter and her other close friends.

The phrase 'were with her other close friends' is incorrect and disrupts sentence flow. Replacing 'were' with 'and' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I really enjoy giving handmade gift to others.

✓ I really enjoy giving handmade gifts to others.

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the plural context indicated by 'others'.

× before we knew year one of my students gifted me a really meaningful gift to me.

✓ before we knew it, one of my students in year one gifted me a really meaningful gift.

The phrase 'before we knew year one' is unclear and incorrect. Adding 'it' clarifies the timing. Also, 'gifted me a really meaningful gift to me' is redundant; 'gifted me a really meaningful gift' suffices.

× I gifted my hand embroidered hair clips and hair bows.

✓ I gifted my hand-embroidered hair clips and hair bows to her.

The verb 'gift' requires an indirect object or preposition 'to' to indicate the recipient. Also, 'hand embroidered' should be hyphenated as 'hand-embroidered'.

× In my opinion yes, but not all people appreciated.

✓ In my opinion, yes, but not all people appreciate it.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'Appreciated' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'appreciate'. Adding 'it' clarifies what is appreciated.

× last summer I gifted. Hair clips to my close friend but I think she didn't like it.

✓ Last summer, I gifted hair clips to my close friend, but I think she didn't like them.

The period after 'gifted' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. Also, 'hair clips' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× Because she I have never seen her using this hair clips.

✓ Because I have never seen her using these hair clips.

The original sentence has an extra pronoun 'she' and incorrect demonstrative 'this' for plural 'hair clips'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.