Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at giving gifts because I often feel confused when choosing something in the shop. Therefore, I usually ask my sister to help me pick a gift, and it makes me happy to see the recipient's reaction.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific reasons for your choices.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or weddings because I believe gifts should mark meaningful events. I avoid giving gifts randomly since it might seem wasteful without a special reason.

Sugestão: Your answer shows some relevant points but is hard to understand due to unclear vocabulary and grammar errors. Focus on using clear and relevant vocabulary, organize your ideas logically with linking words, and provide specific details.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I consider its quality first because I want the recipient to enjoy it for a long time. Also, the gift should be unique rather than common, so it feels special and memorable.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons clearly, and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas.

Exemplo: No, I have never given handmade gifts because I don't know how to make them. I find it confusing to create such things, so I prefer to buy high-quality and unique gifts from stores.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and express your opinion clearly with relevant vocabulary.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better than cheaper ones. What matters more is that the gift is unique and of good quality so the recipient can enjoy it for a long time.

× Leave no, I didn't be good too given a gift to anybody be 'cause I'm beat very confused when I want in a shop.

✓ No, I am not good at giving gifts to anybody because I get very confused when I go to a shop.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't be' and 'given' where the correct forms are 'am not' and 'giving'. The verb 'be' should be in the present tense 'am' to match the subject 'I'. Also, 'given' is a past participle and should be replaced with the gerund 'giving' to express the action properly.

× So I always preface to my sister to choose a gift for me so I can give out to another one and it's become very happy to see that.

✓ So I always ask my sister to choose a gift for me so I can give it to someone else, and it makes me very happy to see that.

The phrase 'preface to my sister' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'ask'. Also, 'give out to another one' is awkward; 'give it to someone else' is clearer. 'It's become very happy' should be 'it makes me very happy' to express the feeling properly.

× Just when I prefer to give you on some special occasions such as birthday party or marries any wisely because I felt that it was a meaningful.

✓ I usually prefer to give gifts on special occasions such as birthday parties or weddings because I feel that it is meaningful.

The sentence misuses 'prefer to give you' and 'marries any wisely'. 'Prefer to give gifts' is correct, and 'weddings' is the proper noun for 'marries'. Also, 'felt' should be 'feel' to match the present tense context.

× If I given a gift to A to add that time, it will show us some application or celebrations are.

✓ If I give a gift at that time, it will show some appreciation or celebration.

'If I given' is incorrect; the correct form is 'If I give' (present tense) for conditional sentences. 'Application' is likely a mistranslation of 'appreciation'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× However, I avoid to given a gift if there is not any type of occasions because it was just so bases of money.

✓ However, I avoid giving gifts if there are no special occasions because it is just a waste of money.

'Avoid to given' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid giving'. 'Bases of money' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'waste of money'. Also, 'occasions' should be plural and 'there is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural.

× Well, I have considered the quality of our products, which is the most important because I do not want an animal effilee 10 Schmundt after receiving such a gifts, and I didn't avoid these sizes, whether it was a small or big, big, no matter, it should be our unique as compared to another gift so that it so that it will feel happy or whenever they use their remember to me.

✓ Well, I consider the quality of the products, which is the most important because I do not want any disappointment after receiving such gifts, and I do not mind the size, whether it is small or big. No matter, it should be unique compared to other gifts so that the recipient feels happy and remembers me when they use it.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'our products' should be 'the products'; 'an animal effilee 10 Schmundt' is unclear but likely means 'disappointment'; 'such a gifts' should be 'such gifts'; 'didn't avoid these sizes' should be 'do not mind the size'; 'it should be our unique' should be 'it should be unique'; 'as compared to another gift' should be 'compared to other gifts'; 'so that it so that it will feel happy' is corrected to 'so that the recipient feels happy'; 'whenever they use their remember to me' is corrected to 'remembers me when they use it'.

× Ignore I don't give a nanny die. Both had been give hours to someones because I do not know how to make me how to made made our things and I'm just so confused whenever I try or learn to such type of things and rather than given a handmade gift I prefer to purchase the best quality and unique gifts from a shops.

✓ No, I don't give handmade gifts. I have never given handmade gifts to anyone because I do not know how to make them, and I get confused whenever I try to learn such things. Rather than giving a handmade gift, I prefer to purchase the best quality and unique gifts from shops.

The original sentence has many errors: 'Ignore' should be 'No'; 'nanny die' is incorrect for 'handmade'; 'Both had been give hours to someones' is unclear and corrected to 'I have never given handmade gifts to anyone'; 'how to make me how to made made our things' is corrected to 'how to make them'; 'try or learn to such type of things' is corrected to 'try to learn such things'; 'given a handmade gift' should be 'giving a handmade gift'; 'a shops' corrected to 'shops'.

× No, I didn't think that the inexpensive Visa express my feelings better than as compared to cheaper.

✓ No, I don't think that expensive gifts express my feelings better than cheaper ones.

'Didn't think' is past tense but the context is present; 'Visa' is a mishearing of 'gifts'; 'inexpensive' contradicts 'better than cheaper'; corrected to 'expensive gifts' and 'cheaper ones' for clarity and correct comparison.

× Well by when we are giving a gift to someone, no matter it is of a high price or lower price, it should be our unique and of good qualities so that it can retain by them for a long period an enjoy enjoy it.

✓ Well, when we give a gift to someone, no matter if it is high-priced or low-priced, it should be unique and of good quality so that they can keep it for a long time and enjoy it.

'Our unique' should be 'unique'; 'good qualities' should be 'good quality' (uncountable); 'retain by them' is incorrect, corrected to 'they can keep it'; 'an enjoy enjoy it' corrected to 'and enjoy it'.