Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'sold give' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan efektif.

Exemplo: I wouldn't say I'm very good at giving gifts because sometimes I don't know what to choose for my friends or girlfriend on special occasions, so I usually search for ideas online.

Sugestão: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan jelas.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays, to my friends, family, and girlfriend.

Sugestão: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih terstruktur dan jelas.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I always consider the price to make sure it's worth it for both me and the recipient. If it's too expensive, I usually avoid buying it.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta singkat. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

Exemplo: I have never given a handmade gift before, but I think they are very meaningful and unique. Maybe I will try making one for someone next time.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan contoh yang lebih spesifik untuk mendukung pendapat.

Exemplo: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. A gift that shows effort, like a handmade item or something you made yourself, can express your feelings more sincerely.

× Actually I can't call myself good at giving a gift because sometimes I didn't know what gift that I sold give to my friends or my girlfriends when in special day but I just memorize or searching it on the Internet.

✓ Actually I can't call myself good at giving gifts because sometimes I didn't know what gift I should give to my friends or my girlfriends on special days, but I just memorize or search for it on the Internet.

The sentence contains past tense errors and incorrect modal verb usage. 'didn't know' is correct past tense, but 'sold give' is incorrect; it should be 'should give' (modal verb usage). Also, 'memorize or searching' is inconsistent; it should be 'memorize or search' to maintain parallel structure. 'a gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match general meaning. 'when in special day' is incorrect preposition and article usage; it should be 'on special days'. Suggestions: Use correct modal verbs, maintain parallel verb forms, and correct prepositions and articles.

× I usually give a gift to others when it's special day or when it's their birthday and I give a gift to my friends, my family and my girlfriend.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on special days or on their birthdays, and I give gifts to my friends, my family, and my girlfriend.

The phrase 'a gift' should be plural 'gifts' when talking about general or repeated actions. 'special day' should be plural 'special days' and use the preposition 'on' instead of 'when it's'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'others'. Suggestions: Use plural forms for general statements and correct prepositions.

× I always consider with money when I choosing a gift with a price.

✓ I always consider the price when I choose a gift.

The phrase 'consider with money' is incorrect; 'consider' does not require 'with'. Also, 'when I choosing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I choose' (present tense). 'a gift with a price' is redundant; better to say 'the price'. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid redundancy.

× I always consider with money when I choosing a gift with a price.

✓ I always consider the price when I choose a gift.

The verb 'choosing' is incorrect here; it should be the base form 'choose' after 'when I'. Also, 'consider with money' is incorrect; 'consider' does not take 'with'. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× I mean it's like is that worth for myself or for my friends that I bring it give Like if it's too expensive for me I would not give that gift.

✓ I mean, it's like whether it's worth it for myself or for my friends that I give it to. If it's too expensive for me, I would not give that gift.

The sentence has modal verb and sentence structure issues. 'is that worth for' should be 'whether it's worth it for'. 'bring it give' is incorrect; it should be 'give it to'. Also, missing commas and run-on sentence. Suggestions: Use correct modal expressions, proper sentence structure, and punctuation.

× For right now, I never given a handmade gift before, but I think it's very meaningful and unique if I keep a handmade gift right.

✓ Up to now, I have never given a handmade gift before, but I think it's very meaningful and unique if I keep a handmade gift.

'never given' needs an auxiliary verb 'have' to form present perfect tense: 'have never given'. 'For right now' is awkward; 'Up to now' or 'So far' is better. 'keep a handmade gift right' is unclear; 'keep a handmade gift' suffices. Suggestions: Use correct tense forms and clearer expressions.

× So maybe I will try making one for someone next time.

✓ So maybe I will try making one for someone next time.

This sentence is correct in grammar and tense; no correction needed.

× I think no, because if you want to express your feeling you give a gift that have much efforts like for example and handmade or maybe that a gift that you made with your own self.

✓ I think no, because if you want to express your feelings, you give a gift that has much effort, like, for example, a handmade one or maybe a gift that you made yourself.

'feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'have much efforts' is incorrect; 'has much effort' is correct (singular). 'and handmade' should be 'a handmade one'. 'with your own self' is awkward; 'yourself' is correct. Suggestions: Use correct quantifiers, plural forms, and pronouns.