Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý để làm rõ ý. Hạn chế lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng đơn giản hơn để tránh gây khó hiểu.

Exemplo: No, I am not very good at giving gifts because I often forget important occasions. For example, I have missed two birthdays recently, so I usually end up not giving any presents.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays. For instance, I often give my mom flowers on her birthday to show my love.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I think about what the person likes or needs. For example, my friend loves football, so I usually buy him a football boot to show my support.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác. Cố gắng dùng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và có liên kết để làm rõ ý.

Exemplo: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I am not good at making things. Instead, I prefer to buy presents for special occasions.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh dùng tiếng lắp và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết ý tốt hơn.

Exemplo: From my perspective, expensive gifts are not necessary to express feelings. Instead, thoughtful and meaningful gifts are better. For example, I usually give my sister books because she loves reading.

× I miss about two birthday and it's usually end up that I don't give a gift to them.

✓ I miss about two birthdays and it usually ends up that I don't give a gift to them.

The noun 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' because it refers to more than one occasion. Also, the verb 'end' should be in third person singular form 'ends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× it's usually end up that I don't give a gift to them.

✓ it usually ends up that I don't give a gift to them.

The verb 'end' must be in third person singular form 'ends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I usually give the gift on the other birthday.

✓ I usually give the gift on other birthdays.

The phrase 'the other birthday' is incorrect because it implies a specific single birthday. The plural 'other birthdays' is appropriate when referring to birthdays in general.

× I usually give my mom a flower on her birthday.

✓ I usually give my mom flowers on her birthday.

Typically, 'flowers' is used in plural when giving as a gift, unless specifying a single flower. Using plural 'flowers' sounds more natural.

× I will consider what the other one or what the other need to give you more details my friends is the definition of football.

✓ I will consider what the other person needs. To give you more details, my friend is a big fan of football.

The phrase 'the other one' is vague; 'the other person' is clearer. The verb 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with singular subject. The sentence about 'my friends is the definition of football' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'my friend is a big fan of football' for clarity.

× what the other one or what the other need

✓ what the other person needs

The verb 'need' should be in third person singular form 'needs' to agree with singular subject 'the other person'.

× my friends is the definition of football.

✓ my friend is a big fan of football.

The plural noun 'friends' does not agree with singular verb 'is'. Also, 'definition of football' is an incorrect expression; 'big fan of football' is more appropriate.

× I usually buy him a football booth umm apart.

✓ I usually buy him a football boot, umm, apart from that.

The word 'booth' is likely a typo for 'boot'. The phrase 'apart' is incomplete; 'apart from that' is a correct prepositional phrase.

× The reason is that I want him to know I support his.

✓ The reason is that I want him to know I support him.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect here; it should be 'him' as the object of the verb 'support'.

× No, I would say apart.

✓ No, I would say apart from that,

The phrase 'apart' is incomplete; it should be 'apart from that' to make sense.

× I am not very handy.

✓ I am not very good at making things.

While 'handy' is understandable, 'good at making things' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× As a result, if I want to make a gift, it will be very ugly and very bad.

✓ As a result, if I try to make a gift, it will turn out ugly and bad.

The phrase 'make a gift' is awkward; 'try to make a gift' is better. Also, 'very ugly and very bad' is redundant; 'ugly and bad' suffices.

× So I would go up out of my way to say that I would buy a present to give them on the occasion.

✓ So I would go out of my way to say that I would buy a present to give them on the occasion.

The phrase 'go up out of my way' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go out of my way'.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× MMM it from my perspective if I think expensive gift is not very necessary MMM you can give them a thoughtful and meaningful gift instead.

✓ From my perspective, I think an expensive gift is not very necessary. You can give them a thoughtful and meaningful gift instead.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to two clear sentences with proper structure.

× I usually give my sister a book because they love reading so.

✓ I usually give my sister a book because she loves reading.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect when referring to 'my sister' (singular). It should be 'she'.