Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the sentences more natural. For example, instead of saying "I am really good in giving gifts," say "I am really good at giving gifts." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly using linking words like "and" or "because."

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at giving gifts. I usually give presents to my loved ones on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and weddings because it shows my love and respect towards them.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use plural forms correctly (e.g., "birthdays"), and avoid repeating "usually" multiple times. Use linking words like "especially" and "so" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify "something special happening in other life" by specifying "in their life."

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions, especially birthdays or when something important happens in their life. I try to choose presents based on their preferences and needs, so I often ask them what they would like before buying the gift.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. For example, "founder of reading" is incorrect; you might mean "fond of reading." Also, avoid phrases like "on the other hand side." Use linking words such as "for example" and "otherwise" to improve coherence. Try to be more precise and natural in your vocabulary.

Exemplo: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's interests and preferences. For example, if someone is fond of reading, I usually give them books. Otherwise, if they like cooking, I might give them a recipe book or related items.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For instance, say "When I was a child" instead of "When I was child." Also, "handmade scratch card" could be "handmade scratch cards." The last part "gift cards to my parents special or special" is unclear and should be rephrased. Use linking words like "and" to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I have given handmade gifts before, but not recently. When I was a child, I used to make handmade scratch cards, which I often gave to my school friends on their birthdays. I also made special cards for my parents.

Sugestão: Your answer tries to express a good opinion but is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. For example, "dependent gifts are dependent on cost" is confusing. Try to say "I don't think gifts need to be expensive to express feelings." Also, complete your sentences and use linking words like "because" to explain your reasoning clearly.

Exemplo: In my opinion, expensive gifts do not necessarily express feelings better. If someone gives you a costly gift without meaning, it is not valuable. On the other hand, a cheap or handmade gift can show emotional value and love because of the thought behind it.

× I am really good in giving gifts.

✓ I am really good at giving gifts.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. So, it should be 'good at giving gifts'. This is a common collocation in English.

× Moreover, in weddings because it shows the love and respect towards them and I believe it is very important to give gifts.

✓ Moreover, I give gifts at weddings because it shows love and respect towards them, and I believe it is very important to give gifts.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb in the first part. Adding 'I give gifts at weddings' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I usually give presents on special occasions especially on birthday and when there is something special happening in other life.

✓ I usually give presents on special occasions, especially on birthdays and when there is something special happening in others' lives.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; it should be 'in others' lives' with the possessive form. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match the general statement.

× I ask them whatever they need and then I accordingly give it to them.

✓ I ask them what they need and then I accordingly give it to them.

The phrase 'ask them whatever they need' is incorrect; it should be 'ask them what they need' to form a proper question clause.

× I usually use give according to their need and their preference.

✓ I usually give according to their needs and preferences.

The phrase 'use give' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'need' and 'preference' should be plural to match the context of multiple people.

× if someone is the founder of reading then I usually prefer to give books.

✓ If someone is fond of reading, then I usually prefer to give books.

The phrase 'founder of reading' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fond of reading' to indicate liking or interest.

× Or on the other hand side if someone is interested in cooking then I would definitely love to give them cooking recipe book or something.

✓ On the other hand, if someone is interested in cooking, then I would definitely love to give them a cooking recipe book or something similar.

The phrase 'Or on the other hand side' is redundant and incorrect. 'On the other hand' is sufficient. Also, 'cooking recipe book' needs an article 'a' and 'or something' should be 'or something similar' for clarity.

× When I was child then I used to make handmade scratch card which I often gave to my school friends on their birthday and most of the time I used to gift cards to my parents special or special.

✓ When I was a child, I used to make handmade scratch cards which I often gave to my school friends on their birthdays, and most of the time I used to gift cards to my parents on special occasions.

The phrase 'was child' needs the article 'a'. 'Scratch card' should be plural 'scratch cards' to match 'which I often gave'. 'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays'. The phrase 'parents special or special' is unclear and corrected to 'parents on special occasions' for clarity.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× In my opinion I would not say dependent gifts are dependent on cost because if someone is giving you ₹1000 gift and she and they are not really meant to it, they will not worth it.

✓ In my opinion, I would not say gifts are dependent on cost because if someone is giving you a ₹1000 gift and they do not really mean it, it will not be worth it.

The phrase 'dependent gifts are dependent on cost' is redundant and awkward; simplified to 'gifts are dependent on cost'. The pronouns 'she and they' are confusing; replaced with 'they'. 'Meant to it' is incorrect; corrected to 'mean it'. 'Will not worth it' should be 'will not be worth it'.

× If someone giving you cheap with handmade gift then it show the emotional value and the love of.

✓ If someone gives you a cheap handmade gift, then it shows the emotional value and love behind it.

The verb 'giving' should be 'gives' to agree with 'someone'. 'Cheap with handmade gift' is incorrect; corrected to 'a cheap handmade gift'. 'It show' should be 'it shows'. The phrase 'the love of' is incomplete; corrected to 'love behind it' for clarity.