Gifts— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with brief details. Avoid fillers and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts. For example, last month I bought a small book and a card for a friend’s birthday, and she was very happy with the thoughtful present.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use one linking phrase to add a detail, and finish the sentence. Remove repetitions and avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: I usually give gifts on birthdays and special occasions like Christmas. For example, my close friends and I exchange presents every Christmas, which makes us feel connected and happy.

Sugestão: Use clear, accurate grammar and give a concrete example of how you match a gift to preferences. Explain briefly why it matters using a linking word.

Exemplo: I consider the recipient’s tastes and personality when choosing a gift. For instance, if a friend loves baking, I might give them a unique baking tool because it shows I know their interests and it’s more likely to be appreciated.

Sugestão: Be confident and concise. State directly that you have, then give one specific detail about the handmade gift and the reaction. Remove fillers like 'umm' and 'well'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Two months ago I made homemade chocolate and cookies for a friend’s birthday, and she said she loved the effort and flavors.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with a reason or short example. Use a linking word to connect opinion and reason.

Exemplo: I don’t think expensive gifts are better; it depends on the situation. In my view, a thoughtful, inexpensive gift often means more because it shows the giver understood the recipient’s tastes.

× Uh, when the special occasions or someone's birthday, I tend to give present for others and.

✓ On special occasions or someone's birthday, I tend to give presents to others.

Use correct prepositions and articles: 'on special occasions' not 'when the special occasions'; 'give presents to others' uses 'to' after give and plural 'presents' for general habit. Also include article 'someone's'.

× Last month I gave some small gift to my friends to celebrate her birthday.

✓ Last month I gave a small gift to my friend to celebrate her birthday.

Pronoun agreement and article: 'friends' (plural) conflicts with 'her' (singular). Use 'friend' singular to match 'her'. Use article 'a' before 'small gift'.

× Well, I tend to give gifts for to others when it's someone's birthday or in special occasions such as Christmas.

✓ Well, I tend to give gifts to others when it's someone's birthday or on special occasions such as Christmas.

Remove redundant preposition 'for' and use 'to' with 'give'. Use 'on special occasions' rather than 'in special occasions'.

× Umm well, I usually exchange the gift with my close friends and we really enjoy it and we feel really satisfied and overjoyed because we.

✓ I usually exchange gifts with my close friends, and we really enjoy it; we feel satisfied and overjoyed because of this.

Incomplete sentence: 'because we.' lacks an object or clause. Use plural 'gifts' for general habit and complete the reason 'because of this'. Also combine clauses for clarity.

× I usually consider personal preferences and personality.

✓ I usually consider personal preferences and personality traits.

Improves noun choice: 'personality' alone is acceptable but 'personality traits' is clearer when paired with 'personal preferences'. This addresses clarity rather than strict grammar but fits allowed types.

× This is merely cause well if well some someone don't don't enjoy my present.

✓ This is mainly because if someone doesn't enjoy my present,

Grammar fixes: 'merely cause' should be 'mainly because'. Remove duplicated words and use correct verb agreement 'doesn't' for singular 'someone'.

× So I think when in this situation I I feel really emotionally drained.

✓ So I think that in this situation I feel really emotionally drained.

Remove duplicate 'I' and correct word order: 'think that in this situation I feel' is natural. Eliminates redundancy.

× Well, I don't remember clearly though.

✓ Well, I don't remember clearly.

The sentence is fine but 'though' is unnecessary here. This is a minor style issue; tense is present and appropriate.

× Two months ago it was umm, my friend's birthday, so I gave her umm, small handmade gift which was umm, chocolate and cookies.

✓ Two months ago it was my friend's birthday, so I gave her a small handmade gift, which was chocolate and cookies.

Add article 'a' before 'small handmade gift' and use commas properly. 'which was chocolate and cookies' clarifies the gift's contents.

× Umm I made it for her so she was really satisfied.

✓ I made it for her, so she was really satisfied.

No major tense error; add comma for clarity. Third person singular 'was' is correct for past tense 'she'.

× Not really, it really depends on the situation.

✓ Not really; it depends on the situation.

Avoid repeating 'really' twice; use semicolon or period to separate clauses. This improves clarity and conciseness.

× However, I normally satisfied with any gift because I think the giver's mind is more important than the prices.

✓ However, I am usually satisfied with any gift because I think the giver's intention is more important than the price.

Correct verb 'am satisfied' with 'usually' (position), use 'intention' or 'mind' (prefer 'intention') and singular 'price' when speaking generally. 'Prices' is awkward; 'price' suffices as an uncountable concept here.