History— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and fix verb agreement and article use.

Exemplo: Yes — I have. I studied the history of the Ottoman Empire and modern Turkish social history. From these studies I discovered distinctive political institutions and social customs that make our country culturally unique.

Sugestão: Organise your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then list methods using linking words and give a brief reason. Correct phrasing (use "different resources" and "check the reliability of sources").

Exemplo: I mainly learn history by watching documentaries and reading books. I also consult different resources, such as academic articles and interviews, to check the reliability of information and find firsthand accounts.

Sugestão: Give a clearer structure: start with one concise main benefit, then add two specific supporting points with examples. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g. "contributes" and possessives).

Exemplo: One main benefit of learning history is that it helps us make better decisions for the future. For example, by studying past political mistakes we can avoid repeating them, and on a personal level, knowing family history contributes to cultural identity and personal development.

Sugestão: Provide a direct opinion sentence followed by one or two precise reasons. Use formal phrasing (avoid contractions like "gonna") and correct pronouns ("our history" vs "history").

Exemplo: Yes — I believe learning history is important because it helps us understand likely outcomes and societal expectations. For instance, knowing economic and social trends from the past can guide public policy and individual choices.

× I studied Ottoman Empire history and Turkish public history and I found some very important details which is makes me think we are very unique country.

✓ I studied Ottoman Empire history and Turkish public history, and I found some very important details which make me think we are a very unique country.

The phrase 'which is makes' incorrectly mixes auxiliary 'is' with the verb 'makes'; the correct form uses the base verb 'make' after 'which' referring to 'details' (plural). Also add the article 'a' before 'very unique country'. Suggestion: use 'which make' for plural noun reference and include appropriate articles.

× I usually watch documentaries and read books and I do this different resource because I would like to check reliable of source.

✓ I usually watch documentaries and read books, and I use different resources because I would like to check the reliability of the sources.

Several preposition and word-choice errors: 'do this different resource' is incorrect — use 'use different resources'. 'Check reliable of source' should be 'check the reliability of the sources' where 'of' links noun phrases and 'the' specifies the sources. Suggestions: use 'use' with 'resources' and 'the reliability of the sources'.

× In addition, I would like to search also interviews because there is some important details that that I can.

✓ In addition, I also search interviews because there are some important details that I can learn from them.

The original sentence has word order and missing verb issues ('search also interviews' and ending 'that that I can' is incomplete). Correct structure: 'I also search interviews' or better 'I also look for interviews' and complete the clause with 'that I can learn from them'. Use 'there are' for plural 'details'.

× If you don't know past, you cannot do anything for future.

✓ If you don't know the past, you cannot do anything for the future.

Missing definite articles: use 'the past' and 'the future' when referring to general concepts. This keeps the present simple conditional structure correct. Suggestion: include 'the' before 'past' and 'future'.

× It's very simple I think.

✓ It's very simple, I think.

Needs a comma to separate the comment 'I think' from the main clause; grammar classed here as punctuation affecting clause relation, treated as adjective/adverb phrase placement. Suggestion: add a comma to improve clarity.

× And of course it's it's contributes to personal development and it's very traditional.

✓ And of course it contributes to personal development, and it is very traditional.

'it's it's contributes' contains duplication and 'contributes' should follow 'it' without contraction duplication. Also expand 'it's' to 'it is' for clarity in the second clause. Remove the extra 'it's'.

× You need to know how your granddads or grandma's, are they living in the past?

✓ You need to know how your grandfathers or grandmothers lived in the past.

Use correct plural nouns 'grandfathers' and 'grandmothers' (no apostrophes). The question form 'are they living in the past?' is awkward; since examiner asked about knowing history, better to use past tense 'lived in the past'. Remove the comma and restructure as a statement. Suggestion: avoid apostrophes for plurals and match tense.

× Yes, I think it's very important and everyone should learn history because if you don't know our history, we cannot predict what's gonna happen in the future and what's expectation from us.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important and everyone should learn history because if you don't know our history, we cannot predict what will happen in the future or what is expected of us.

Informal 'gonna' should be replaced with 'will'; 'what's expectation from us' is ungrammatical — use 'what is expected of us'. Also keep consistent formal contractions: 'it is' preferred. Suggestions: replace informal language and use passive 'is expected of' for clarity.