Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'borrow' nên là 'borrowed', 'abuse' nên là 'bills' hoặc 'expenses', và 'low' nên là 'loan'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số phần không rõ ràng, bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends and family a few times. For instance, once I needed a small loan to pay for unexpected medical bills. I always try to repay the money quickly to keep good relationships.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'order us' không rõ nghĩa, 'too close friend or family member member' bị lặp từ và sai ngữ pháp, 'allowing somebody to a friend' không đúng cấu trúc. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to close friends and family when they needed temporary financial help. For example, last year I lent money to a friend who had unexpected medical expenses. I believe helping others in difficult times strengthens relationships and builds trust.

× Yes, I have borrow money from others on a few occasions, usually from close friends or family members.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from others on a few occasions, usually from close friends or family members.

The verb 'borrow' should be in the past participle form 'borrowed' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× For example, when I faced unexpected expenses like urgent medical abuse, I asked for a small low and to manage the situation.

✓ For example, when I faced unexpected expenses like urgent medical bills, I asked for a small loan to manage the situation.

The word 'abuse' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'bills'. Also, 'low' is a typo and should be 'loan'. These corrections clarify the meaning.

× I always make sure to repay the money as soon as possible to maintain your relationships.

✓ I always make sure to repay the money as soon as possible to maintain my relationships.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own relationships, so 'my' should be used.

× Yes, I have lent money to order us on a few occasions, usually too close friend or family member member who needed temporary financial help.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others on a few occasions, usually to close friends or family members who needed temporary financial help.

The phrase 'order us' is incorrect and should be 'others'. Also, 'too' should be 'to', and 'friend or family member member' is repetitive and should be pluralized correctly as 'friends or family members'.

× For example, last year allowing somebody to a friend who was facing unexpected medical expenses.

✓ For example, last year I lent money to a friend who was facing unexpected medical expenses.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. Adding the subject 'I' and the verb 'lent money' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I believe have been others in times of need strengthens relationship and showed rust.

✓ I believe helping others in times of need strengthens relationships and shows trust.

The phrase 'have been others' is incorrect; it should be 'helping others'. Also, 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships', and 'showed rust' is a typo for 'shows trust'.