Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the situation with specific details. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use appropriate vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends several times. For instance, when I go out with them and realize I don't have enough money to buy something I want, I usually ask a close friend to lend me some. Since we are good friends, it is easy and comfortable to do so.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes and using linking words to make your response more coherent. Provide a clear topic sentence and add specific details to support your answer. Avoid redundancy and use appropriate vocabulary related to lending money.

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to others quite often. Since we are close friends, it is not a problem to borrow and lend money between us. I usually lend money especially to my close friends when they need help.

× Actually I did it so many times when I wear with my friends and have to buy anything that I want and look into my wallet and find it will not enough money to buy it.

✓ Actually, I did it so many times when I was with my friends and had to buy anything that I wanted and looked into my wallet and found there was not enough money to buy it.

The sentence contains several past tense verbs that were incorrectly used in present tense or future tense forms. 'wear' should be 'was' to indicate past continuous state of being with friends. 'have' should be 'had' to indicate past necessity. 'want' should be 'wanted' to match past context. 'look' should be 'looked' and 'find' should be 'found' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'will not enough money' is incorrect; it should be 'there was not enough money' to correctly express past lack of money.

× Actually I did it so many times when I wear with my friends and have to buy anything that I want and look into my wallet and find it will not enough money to buy it.

✓ Actually, I did it so many times when I was with my friends and had to buy anything that I wanted and looked into my wallet and found there was not enough money to buy it.

The preposition 'with' is correctly used here, but the verb 'wear' is incorrect. The issue is more about verb choice than preposition. No preposition correction needed here.

× I will ask my friend to borrow money from him and I think it is easy because we are friends.

✓ I would ask my friend to borrow money from him and I think it is easy because we are friends.

The use of 'will' suggests future certainty, but since the context is about past repeated actions, 'would' is more appropriate to express habitual past actions. Also, 'borrow money from him' is correct but could be simplified to 'borrow money from my friend' to avoid redundancy.

× I will ask my friend to borrow money from him and I think it is easy because we are friends.

✓ I would ask my friend to borrow money from him and I think it is easy because we are friends.

The phrase 'ask my friend to borrow money from him' is awkward because 'my friend' and 'him' refer to the same person. It should be 'I would ask my friend to lend me money' or 'I would borrow money from my friend.' The pronoun 'him' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× Yes, as I mentioned the we were close friends so it doesn't make any problem to borough and meant from each other.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, we were close friends so it didn't make any problem to borrow and lend from each other.

The pronoun 'the' before 'we' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'borough' and 'meant' are misspellings of 'borrow' and 'lend'. The verb tense 'doesn't' should be 'didn't' to match past tense context.

× Yes, as I mentioned the we were close friends so it doesn't make any problem to borough and meant from each other.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, we were close friends so it didn't make any problem to borrow and lend from each other.

The sentence mixes present tense 'doesn't' with past context. It should be 'didn't' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'borough' and 'meant' are incorrect spellings of 'borrow' and 'lend'.

× And yeah, I lent money to others too many times, but I lent especially to my close friends.

✓ And yeah, I lent money to others many times, but I lent especially to my close friends.

The phrase 'too many times' is awkward here; 'many times' is more appropriate. The past tense 'lent' is correctly used.