Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my father once. At that time, I wanted to buy a new computer but faced some financial difficulties. Therefore, I asked him to lend me some money to help with the purchase.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to others several times, mostly to my best friend. We get along very well, so whenever she has a problem, she immediately asks me if I can help her financially.

× Well, I have one borrow money from my father because I remember at that time I was blend too.

✓ Well, I have borrowed money from my father because I remember at that time I was broke too.

The phrase 'I have one borrow money' is incorrect because 'one' is unnecessary and 'borrow' should be in past participle form 'borrowed' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'blend' is likely a typo for 'broke', meaning having no money.

× However, there are some financial struggle.

✓ However, there was some financial struggle.

The noun 'struggle' is singular, so 'some' is not appropriate here. Also, since the event happened in the past, 'are' should be changed to 'was' to match the past tense.

× Therefore, I have to ask my father to lend me some money.

✓ Therefore, I had to ask my father to lend me some money.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the modal verb phrase 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I have several times then.

✓ Yes, I have lent money several times then.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'lent'. Also, 'several times then' is awkward; it is better to say 'several times' or 'then' separately.

× Then Monday to others.

✓ Then I lent money to others.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It likely intended to say 'Then I lent money to others.' The word 'Monday' seems to be a typo or mishearing.

× Well, I remembered as most of the time were from my best friend because we are very get along well with it which each other.

✓ Well, I remember that most of the time it was from my best friend because we get along very well with each other.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'remembered' should be 'remember' to match present perfect context; 'were' should be 'was' to agree with singular 'most of the time'; 'we are very get along well with it which each other' is incorrect and should be 'we get along very well with each other'. Pronouns and verb forms are misused.

× Therefore when she have some problem she will immediately asked me if I could.

✓ Therefore, when she has some problem, she immediately asks me if I can help.

'She have' should be 'she has' for third person singular present tense; 'will immediately asked' is incorrect, should be 'immediately asks' to maintain present tense; 'if I could' is incomplete and unclear, better to say 'if I can help'.