Money— Part 1 Relatório

× No it hasn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

这里学生想表达自己没有借过钱，应该用第一人称主语'I'和助动词'haven't'，而不是'it hasn't'。'It hasn't'是第三人称单数，主语错误，导致句子结构不完整。建议使用'I haven't'来正确表达否定的经历。

× she will give me some money's.

✓ she will give me some money.

'money's'是错误的形式，money是不可数名词，不需要加所有格's。这里应该直接使用'money'。建议去掉错误的所有格形式。

× my friends wanted to buy a birthday present for her girlfriend but she about he doesn't didn't have enough money so he asked me to lend some money and I brought ¥100 to him.

✓ My friend wanted to buy a birthday present for his girlfriend, but he didn't have enough money, so he asked me to lend him some money and I gave him ¥100.

句子中代词使用混乱，'my friends'应为单数'friend'，'her girlfriend'应为'his girlfriend'，'she about he doesn't didn't'语法混乱，应为'he didn't'。'brought ¥100 to him'表达不自然，改为'gave him ¥100'更合适。建议理清代词指代，保持一致性，并使用正确的动词形式。

× she about he doesn't didn't have enough money

✓ he didn't have enough money

这里时态混乱，'doesn't didn't'是错误的组合，应该使用过去时'didn't'来表达过去没有足够的钱。建议使用正确的过去时态形式。