Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "now I'm currently a student", bạn có thể nói ngắn gọn hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về những thứ bạn mua để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I often borrow money from my mother because, as a student without a stable income, I rely on her support. For instance, I usually borrow money to buy textbooks and snacks during my study sessions.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "someone closed need" nên là "someone close needs". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn nếu bạn sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Actually, I have never lent money to others because, as a student without a stable income, it's difficult for me. However, if a close friend urgently needed help, I would try my best to support them.

× Therefore borrowing money from my mother is the only way for me to buy what I need like book or snack and so on.

✓ Therefore borrowing money from my mother is the only way for me to buy what I need like books or snacks and so on.

The nouns 'book' and 'snack' should be in plural form 'books' and 'snacks' because they refer to general items in a non-specific quantity, which requires plural form in English.

× Actually no, because now I'm currently a student and I don't have a stable income, therefore lending money to other is a really hard thing for me.

✓ Actually no, because now I'm currently a student and I don't have a stable income, therefore lending money to others is a really hard thing for me.

The word 'other' should be 'others' to correctly refer to other people in plural form.

× However, if someone closed need money urgently I will try my best to have them.

✓ However, if someone close needs money urgently, I will try my best to help them.

The phrase 'someone closed need' is incorrect. 'Someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'needs'. Also, 'closed' is incorrect here; it should be 'close'. Additionally, 'have them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'help them' to express assistance.