MoneyPart 1 Relatório

SimuladoPart12025-07-16 22:55:41

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Part 1

Examinador

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Candidato

I never borrowed money from anyone because I think that it would make the friendship become complicated. It involves money issues inside. I don't love to borrowing out or borrowing in.

Examinador

Have you ever lent money to others?

Candidato

I have lent money to my friends for one time. It is because he is very urgently need the money for medical issues. Although I don't like lending money but I must do it because it will be.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但语言不够自然,有语法错误,如“love to borrowing”应为“like borrowing”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用更地道的表达方式。

Exemplo: No, I have never borrowed money from anyone because I believe it can complicate friendships and cause misunderstandings.

Have you ever lent money to others?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,如“he is very urgently need”应为“he urgently needed”,句子结尾不完整。建议注意时态一致,句子完整,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to a friend once because he urgently needed it for medical expenses. Although I usually avoid lending money, I felt it was necessary in that situation.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× I never borrowed money from anyone because I think that it would make the friendship become complicated.

I have never borrowed money from anyone because I think that it would make the friendship become complicated.

这里应该使用现在完成时(have never borrowed),因为谈论的是过去到现在的经历,而不是单纯过去的动作。

Verb + -ing form

× I don't love to borrowing out or borrowing in.

I don't like borrowing money from others or lending money to others.

动词love后面不接to + 动名词形式,且表达习惯用like + 动名词形式。'borrowing out or borrowing in'表达不清晰,改为更自然的表达。

Past tense issue

× I have lent money to my friends for one time.

I have lent money to my friend once.

'for one time'用法不正确,应该用once表示一次。且friends复数与后文he不符,改为friend单数。

Present tense issue

× It is because he is very urgently need the money for medical issues.

It is because he urgently needs the money for medical issues.

'is very urgently need'结构错误,应该用主语he + 动词needs(第三人称单数)+ 副词urgently。

Sentence structure errors

× Although I don't like lending money but I must do it because it will be.

Although I don't like lending money, I must do it because it is necessary.

'Although'和'but'不能同时使用,且句子末尾不完整,需补充完整表达。

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