Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰，且内容有些重复。建议你在回答时注意时态一致，使用简单明了的句子结构，并且避免冗余。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends when I was young because I didn't have enough money for lunch at school. For example, sometimes I forgot to bring my lunch money, so my friends kindly lent me some money to buy food.

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议你在回答时先直接回答问题，然后用连词连接具体的考虑因素，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: I haven't lent money to others because no one has asked me. However, if someone did ask, I would consider the situation carefully, such as who they are and our relationship, before deciding.

× Yes, I have borrowed the money from my friends because when I was young I don't have enough money to take to school and therefore when the lunch I don't forgot to order it, therefore my friend to lend me money to buy some food for my lunch.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends because when I was young I didn't have enough money to take to school and therefore when it was lunch I didn't forget to order it, so my friend lent me money to buy some food for my lunch.

句中使用了现在时态“don't have”和“don't forgot”，但描述的是过去的情况，应使用过去时态“didn't have”和“didn't forget”。此外，'my friend to lend me money'结构不正确，应改为过去时态的完整句子“my friend lent me money”。建议根据时间背景选择正确的时态。

× I don't lend the money to others because nobody asking me.

✓ I don't lend money to others because nobody asks me.

句中缺少助动词，'nobody asking me'应改为第三人称单数形式'asks me'，以符合一般现在时的陈述句结构。

× And also actually if the people ask me to lend the money to them, I think I will consider which kind of situation like who is he, how relationship we are or what situation that.

✓ And also, actually, if people ask me to lend them money, I think I will consider the situation, like who they are, what our relationship is, or what the situation is.

句中'if the people ask me'中的'the'不必要，应去掉；'lend the money to them'表达不自然，改为'lend them money'更地道。'who is he'应改为'who they are'以保持主语一致。'how relationship we are'语法错误，应改为'what our relationship is'。此外，句子结构需要调整以更清晰表达意思。