Money— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Candidato
Yes, sometime I have to borrow money from others. Sometimes I focus my violence or I don't have money in my smartphone, so I borrow money from my cargo or my friends and I will.
Examinador
Have you ever lent money to others?
Candidato
Yes, I have the money for other people in some urgent situation. My friend don't have money and they borrow me and they always want to give me back as soon as impossible.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những từ không phù hợp hoặc không đúng ngữ cảnh. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from others when I didn't have enough cash. For example, sometimes my phone's payment app didn't work, so I asked my friends to lend me some money until I could pay them back.
Have you ever lent money to others?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to my friends in urgent situations. For instance, when a friend didn't have enough money to buy something important, I lent them some cash, and they always tried to repay me as soon as possible.
Gramática
× Yes, sometime I have to borrow money from others.
✓ Yes, sometimes I have to borrow money from others.
The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb to express frequency is 'sometimes'. This is a common mistake with adverbs of frequency. Use 'sometimes' to indicate occasional actions.
× Sometimes I focus my violence or I don't have money in my smartphone, so I borrow money from my cargo or my friends and I will.
✓ Sometimes I lose my wallet or I don't have money on my smartphone, so I borrow money from my cargo or my friends.
The phrase 'focus my violence' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended was 'lose my wallet'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'money in my smartphone'; the correct preposition is 'on'. The phrase 'and I will' is incomplete and unnecessary here. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× My friend don't have money and they borrow me and they always want to give me back as soon as impossible.
✓ My friends don't have money and they borrow from me and they always want to give me back as soon as possible.
The subject 'My friend' is singular but followed by 'don't' which is plural; it should be 'My friends don't'. Also, 'borrow me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrow from me'. The phrase 'as soon as impossible' is incorrect; it should be 'as soon as possible'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and prepositional errors.
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