Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些冗长且表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money before. Once, when I forgot my wallet at school, my best friend kindly lent me some money so I could take the bus home.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用适当的连接词和时态表达完整的意思。

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to someone. In high school, a quiet girl asked to borrow money, and I agreed. However, she never paid me back, which I found quite rude.

× after my class is over, I walked into the school but I suddenly found I didn't take my wallet.

✓ after my class was over, I walked into the school but I suddenly found I hadn't taken my wallet.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，时间点是“when I was in primary school”，所以应该使用过去时态。原句中“my class is over”使用了现在时，应该改为过去时“my class was over”。另外，“didn't take my wallet”应改为过去完成时“hadn't taken my wallet”，因为动作发生在过去某一时间之前。

× my best friend gave me some money that I can take the bus and get to the home.

✓ my best friend gave me some money so that I could take the bus and get home.

这里表示目的，应该使用情态动词的过去式“could”而不是“can”，因为事件发生在过去。并且“that I can take the bus”结构不正确，应该用“so that I could take the bus”。另外，“get to the home”中“the”不需要，改为“get home”。

× a quiet girl asked me whether I could lend her lend her money to her and I finally agreed.

✓ a quiet girl asked me whether I could lend her some money and I finally agreed.

句子中“lend her lend her money to her”重复且结构混乱，应删除重复部分，改为“lend her some money”。“whether”后面直接接“could lend her some money”即可。

× she didn't paid money to me and I think she's an impolite girl.

✓ she didn't pay me back and I think she's an impolite girl.

“didn't”后面应接动词原形，“paid”是过去式，错误用法，应改为“pay”。另外，“paid money to me”表达不自然，改为“pay me back”更符合英语习惯。