Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확한 부분이 많습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 연결하는 접속사를 사용해 보세요. 예를 들어, 'I have never borrowed money from others because I feel embarrassed and think it can harm relationships.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: I have never borrowed money from others because I feel embarrassed and think it can harm relationships. For example, borrowing money might create misunderstandings or make people feel uncomfortable.

Sugestão: 답변이 반복적이고 문법 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 예를 들어, 'No, I have never lent money to others because I believe it can damage mutual respect.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: No, I have never lent money to others because I believe it can damage mutual respect. For instance, lending money might cause tension if the borrower cannot repay on time.

× No, I don't have because I think borrow the money from other people is not good relationship because for me I don't like follow something because I just feel like a little embarrassing and it's not respect to the people.

✓ No, I haven't because I think borrowing money from other people is not good for relationships. For me, I don't like to follow something because I just feel a little embarrassed and it's not respectful to the people.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors including missing auxiliary verbs, incorrect verb forms, and awkward phrasing. 'I don't have' should be 'I haven't' to correctly answer the question about experience. 'Borrow the money' should be 'borrowing money' to use the gerund form after 'think'. 'Not good relationship' needs 'for' and plural 'relationships'. 'I don't like follow something' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like to follow something'. 'A little embarrassing' needs the article 'a'. 'It's not respect to the people' should be 'it's not respectful to the people'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't have lend money to others.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to others.

The phrase 'I don't have lend' is incorrect because 'have' should be followed by the past participle 'lent' to form the present perfect tense. The correct form is 'I haven't lent'. This properly indicates the experience of lending money up to now.

× I already said that.

✓ I already said that.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change.

× But I tell you again, I don't like below or lend some money to other people.

✓ But I tell you again, I don't like to borrow or lend money to other people.

The word 'below' is incorrect; it should be 'borrow'. Also, 'lend some money' is better as 'lend money' for naturalness. The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to borrow' and 'to lend'. These corrections fix vocabulary and verb form errors.

× It's not respectful each other.

✓ It's not respectful to each other.

The phrase 'respectful each other' is incorrect because 'respectful' needs the preposition 'to' before 'each other'. The correct phrase is 'respectful to each other'. This fixes the prepositional error and improves clarity.