Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say, 'One time, I went shopping but I didn't have enough money, so I called my friend and borrowed some. He didn't ask for anything in return, which made me very grateful.'

Exemplo: One time, I went shopping but I didn't have enough money, so I called my friend and borrowed some. He didn't ask for anything in return, which made me very grateful.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'I call it off' and awkward sentence structures. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I often lend money to others because I believe it is a way to show kindness. However, sometimes I refuse if I think they might not repay me.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often lend money to others because I believe it is a way to show kindness. However, sometimes I refuse if I think they might not repay me.

× Uh, one time I went to shopping but in need of money because I didn't have enough.

✓ Uh, one time I went shopping but needed money because I didn't have enough.

The phrase 'went to shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct expression without 'to'. Also, 'in need of money' should be 'needed money' to maintain past tense consistency with the rest of the sentence.

× So I called my friend and leaned some money and he didn't ask for anything in bag or didn't give me any future conditions.

✓ So I called my friend and lent some money, and he didn't ask for anything in return or give me any future conditions.

The word 'leaned' is a misspelling of 'lent', the past tense of 'lend'. Also, 'in bag' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in return'. The sentence also needs a comma before 'and' to separate clauses properly.

× Yes, I call it off and lend money to others because I think if I help someone by giving something materialistic, it would give me some opportunity to spread my kindness.

✓ Yes, I call it off and lend money to others because I think if I help someone by giving something materialistic, it gives me an opportunity to spread my kindness.

The phrase 'call it off' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'call it a good deed' or omitted. Also, 'would give me some opportunity' should be 'gives me an opportunity' to match the present tense and general truth expressed here.

× But sometimes I don't give money to others if I think they won't give me back the money.

✓ But sometimes I don't give money to others if I think they won't pay me back.

The phrase 'give me back the money' is awkward; 'pay me back' is the correct collocation. The sentence is otherwise correct in tense and structure.