Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repeated words such as 'my my'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention when and why you borrowed money, and how it affected you.

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends during college because I didn't have a job at that time. Specifically, I needed help to pay my college fees. However, the experience was unpleasant because it made me feel uncomfortable about owing money.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words such as 'uh' and 'like', and correct verb forms (e.g., 'have lent' instead of 'have lend'). Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and provide specific details about the experience to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to my friends several times. However, the last time I lent money to a college friend, he ignored my calls and eventually blocked me. Because of this experience, I decided not to lend money to anyone anymore.

× Yeah, I have lend money to my friends a lot of time, but last time that my experience was very bad, uh, I just lent uh, some money to my college friend and he started like denying my calls and he even like blocked me after some time.

✓ Yeah, I have lent money to my friends a lot of times, but last time my experience was very bad, uh, I just lent, uh, some money to my college friend and he started denying my calls and he even blocked me after some time.

The verb 'lend' is incorrectly used in the present perfect tense; the correct past participle form is 'lent'. Also, 'a lot of time' should be 'a lot of times' to indicate frequency. Additionally, unnecessary filler words like 'like' should be removed for clarity. The phrase 'last time that my experience was very bad' is corrected to 'last time my experience was very bad' for better sentence structure.