Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep answers concise and directly responsive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and coherent phrasing, and avoid repetition. For example, correct time references (e.g., 'about 20 years ago' or 'when I was in Grade One') and clear amounts (e.g., 'one Australian dollar') improve clarity. Link ideas with simple connectors (e.g., 'then', 'after that').

Exemplo: Yes, I have. When I was in Grade One, about twenty years ago, I borrowed one Australian dollar from a friend. I forgot to return it and only remembered three years later when he reminded me, which was quite funny.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with specific examples and simple linking words. Avoid filler phrases ('like') and unclear expressions ('give off that money'). Use consistent grammar and smoother phrasing to convey your idea. Mention a brief consequence or example to make the answer more concrete.

Exemplo: Not usually. I try to avoid lending money because some close friends are not financially stable, and I worry it could cause tension if they cannot pay me back. For instance, I once hesitated to lend money to a childhood friend because I feared it might damage our relationship if repayment was delayed.

× I have. I'm back about twen 20 years back perhaps in grade one in my primary school, I borrowed about 1 bucks and one Australian dollars from my friend and I forgot about it until three years later that he reminded me that oh, you remember that date that you borrowed money from me. It's quite funny.

✓ I have. It was about twenty years ago, perhaps when I was in grade one at primary school. I borrowed one dollar (Australian) from my friend and forgot about it until three years later when he reminded me, 'Do you remember the time you borrowed money from me?' It's quite funny.

Multiple errors: 1) 'I'm back about twen 20 years back' is incorrect: use 'It was about twenty years ago' to express a past time reference (Sentence structure and tense). 2) 'in grade one in my primary school' -> 'when I was in grade one at primary school' corrects preposition and adds necessary verb 'was' (there was missing verb and preposition use). 3) 'about 1 bucks and one Australian dollars' has number and article errors and plural mismatch: use 'one dollar (Australian)' or 'one Australian dollar' (singular with correct currency). 4) 'until three years later that he reminded me that oh, you remember that date that you borrowed money from me' is ungrammatical: use 'until three years later when he reminded me, 'Do you remember the time you borrowed money from me?'' to fix conjunction (use 'when'), reporting clause, and natural phrasing. Suggestions: write clear time phrases (e.g., 'ago'), include linking verbs for past states ('was'), match singular/plural for amounts, use 'when' for time clauses, and punctuate reported speech or questions appropriately.

× No, not really. Like I'm trying to avoid as much as possible because I know that even for people you're close with, I'm emotionally sometimes they are not financially stable and because of how close we might seem to expect me to give off that money for them.

✓ No, not really. I try to avoid it as much as possible because even people you're close to can be financially unstable, and because of our closeness they may expect me to give them money.

Errors and fixes: 1) 'Like I'm trying to avoid as much as possible' is informal and awkward; 'I try to avoid it as much as possible' is clearer and uses correct object 'it'. 2) 'even for people you're close with' -> 'even people you're close to' corrects preposition use ('close to' not 'close with') (preposition error). 3) 'I'm emotionally sometimes they are not financially stable' is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns and clauses; corrected to 'can be financially unstable' to express possibility (modal verb usage) and remove incorrect 'I'm emotionally'. 4) 'because of how close we might seem to expect me to give off that money for them' has multiple issues: wrong verb and phrasing 'give off that money for them' should be 'expect me to give them money' and the clause should be 'because of our closeness they may expect me to give them money' (pronoun and sentence structure fixes). Suggestions: avoid mixing clauses; use correct prepositions ('close to'); use modal verbs like 'may' or 'can' to indicate possibility; place pronouns correctly ('give them money'), and simplify sentences for clarity.