Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and provide a brief reason using linking words. Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting sentence. Correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement and pronoun use.

Exemplo: No, I haven't. I don't like borrowing money because it makes me feel stressed and dependent on others, so I prefer to manage my finances without loans.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, fix grammar (use correct verb tense and forms), avoid repetition, and add one or two specific examples with linking words for coherence. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money to others quite often because I like to help friends in need. For example, I once lent a classmate money to pay their university tuition, and I usually offer small loans for urgent expenses, expecting them to repay me within a month.

× No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I don't like to borrow money from others and it give me too much stress that's why I don't like.

✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I don't like borrowing money from others and it gives me too much stress, so I avoid it.

Errors include incorrect verb form after 'like' (should use the -ing form 'borrowing') and subject-verb agreement ('it give' -> 'it gives'). The sentence is also repetitive and run-on; combine ideas with a comma and conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and ensure verbs agree with their subjects (singular 'it' takes 'gives').

× Is I have lended money to others a lot of time because I I love to help people.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others many times because I love to help people.

Multiple errors: 'Is I' is incorrect (wrong auxiliary/modal and word order) and should be 'Yes, I have'. 'Lended' is incorrect past participle; the correct past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. 'A lot of time' is ungrammatical here; use 'many times'. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary 'have' in present perfect, use irregular past participles (lent), and use 'many times' for frequency.

× If any people face any kinds of difficulty, like they didn't pay their tuition fee at their university cost anything else this time I love to lend them money.

✓ If people face any kind of difficulty, such as being unable to pay their university tuition or other expenses, I like to lend them money.

Problems: 'any people' and 'any kinds of difficulty' are unnatural; use 'people' and 'any kind of difficulty' or 'any difficulties'. 'They didn't pay' mixes past tense with a conditional; use 'being unable to pay' or 'cannot pay' for a general situation. 'Tuition fee at their university cost anything else' is ungrammatical; use 'their university tuition or other expenses'. Also 'this time' is misleading for a general habit — remove it or rephrase. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for general habits, use 'such as' to introduce examples, and use clear noun phrases ('tuition', 'expenses').