Money— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: แก้ไขความชัดเจนของประโยคและหลักไวยากรณ์ ให้ตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อ แล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดที่เฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำเชื่อมเมื่อขยายความ และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4–5 ประโยค เช่น ระบุว่าเมื่อไหร่ ยืมจากใคร เพราะเหตุใด และผลลัพธ์เป็นอย่างไร

Exemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from a close friend once when I was short on cash for rent. I borrowed about $200 and agreed to pay them back within two weeks. Because we had a clear repayment plan, our friendship wasn’t affected. In future, I prefer to avoid borrowing unless it’s an emergency.

Sugestão: ปรับความชัดเจนและโครงสร้างคำตอบ เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ตอบตรงคำถาม ตามด้วยเหตุผลและตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น because/so/therefore และหลีกเลี่ยงการเติมคำเว้นวรรค (filler words) เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและมั่นใจมากขึ้น

Exemplo: Yes, I have lent money, but only rarely. I usually avoid lending because people sometimes fail to repay and that can harm our relationship. For example, I lent a colleague $50 once and it took several months to get it back, so now I ask for a clear repayment date before lending.

× Definitely and I borrowed from the close one.

✓ Definitely. I borrowed from someone close to me.

The original sentence uses 'the close one' which is unnatural and incorrect pronoun usage; 'someone close to me' is the correct, natural expression. Use a clear pronoun or noun phrase to indicate the person. Also add a period to separate clauses for clarity.

× I think that borrowed money isn't good like it could ruin your friendship with someone who who you value the friendship.

✓ I think borrowing money isn't a good idea because it could ruin your friendship with someone you value.

The sentence has structure issues: 'that borrowed money' is wrong form and 'like' is informal and misplaced. Use the gerund 'borrowing' after 'think' and 'because' to show reason. Remove the repeated 'who' and redundant 'the friendship' after 'value'. This makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× So it is better not to borrows.

✓ So it is better not to borrow.

After 'to' the base form of the verb is required, not the third person singular 'borrows'. Use the infinitive 'to borrow' to create the phrase 'better not to borrow'.

× But yeah, I've I've borrow money from my.

✓ But yeah, I've borrowed money before.

The sentence has several errors: repeated 'I've', incorrect verb form 'borrow' instead of past participle 'borrowed' after 'have', and an incomplete ending 'from my'. Use 'I've borrowed money before' to convey the intended meaning with correct present perfect form.

× Yeah, but I barely lent my money to others since I think that it, it's a bad idea to umm, letting someone to like letting someone money because they might not return the money and you will lose the, uh, relat uh, friendship with them as well.

✓ Yeah, but I rarely lend money to others because I think it's a bad idea to lend someone money; they might not return it and you could lose your friendship with them.

Multiple issues: 'barely lent' is inappropriate tense and adverb choice — 'rarely lend' fits present habitual action. Use 'lend' not 'letting', and remove extra 'to' after 'letting'. Use infinitive or base verb correctly: 'to lend someone money' or 'lend someone money'. Replace 'might not return the money' with 'might not return it' for conciseness. Fix tense to present simple for habitual behavior and remove filler words.