App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は簡潔ですが、文法的な誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「'Cause」は口語的すぎるため、「because」に置き換え、文をつなげて自然な流れにしましょう。また、具体的なアプリ名や使い方の詳細を加えると良いです。

Exemplo: I have recently been using the Notes app on my phone because I am a student and need to take detailed notes during my lessons to study effectively.

Sugestão: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と動詞の一致を意識し、文をつなげて話す練習をしましょう。また、具体的なゲーム名を正確に言い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

Exemplo: I am usually interested in game apps such as Clash of Clans and Candy Crush because I enjoy playing video games in my free time.

Sugestão: 発音や文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。例えば、「Social Network」や「Twitter」を正しく発音し、文をつなげて話す練習が必要です。また、どのようにアプリを見つけるか具体的に説明しましょう。

Exemplo: I usually find different apps through social networks like Twitter, where I check my timeline regularly and see recommendations from other users.

Sugestão: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。未来の希望を述べる際は、正しい文構造を使い、具体的にどのような動画アプリを使いたいのか説明しましょう。

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to use video apps that make it easier to watch videos, especially those featuring my favorite celebrities.

× I use Note app.

✓ I use the Note app.

The sentence is in the present tense, but the article 'the' is missing before 'Note app'. This is an article error (ID 22), but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, and article errors are ID 22, this correction is necessary to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I usually interested in.

✓ I am usually interested in games apps like Crash, Lawyer, or Clash of Clans.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Interested' is an adjective that requires a form of 'to be' before it. This is a present tense issue (ID 6). Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to a complete sentence.

× Games app which is like Crash or Lawyer or Clash of Clans.

✓ I like game apps such as Crash, Lawyer, or Clash of Clans.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction provides a complete sentence with proper structure.

× Be 'cause I spare time at.

✓ Because I have spare time,

'Be 'cause' is an incorrect form of 'because'. Also, 'spare time at' is incorrect preposition usage. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11). The correction uses the correct conjunction and phrase.

× Playing video games so I like.

✓ I like playing video games.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject-verb order, a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction forms a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× And I'm interested in. Game app.

✓ And I'm interested in game apps.

The sentence is fragmented and 'game app' should be plural to match the context. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction combines the fragments and corrects the noun number.

× I found the different apps at.

✓ I find different apps on social networks.

The question is about how the student finds apps, implying present tense. The original sentence uses past tense 'found' incorrectly. This is a tense issue (ID 5 and 6). Also, 'at' is incorrect preposition here (ID 11). The correction uses present tense and correct preposition.

× Social Net. Network.

✓ social networks.

Fragmented and unclear phrase, corrected to a proper noun phrase.

× Be 'cause. I use Twitter.

✓ Because I use Twitter,

'Be 'cause' is incorrect; should be 'Because'. Also, sentence fragments corrected.

× And I checked it sweeter every. Iowa.

✓ I check it every day.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('sweeter', 'Iowa'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× And a timeline shows a recommendation.

✓ The timeline shows recommendations.

The article 'a' is incorrect before plural 'recommendations' (article error ID 22). The correction fixes this and makes the sentence natural.

× I'm video apps I want to use.

✓ I want to use video apps.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and fragmented, a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction forms a proper sentence.

× Be 'cause. I want to watch video of him so.

✓ Because I want to watch videos of him,

'Be 'cause' is incorrect; should be 'Because'. Also, sentence fragments and missing conjunctions corrected.

× More easily video apps I want.

✓ I want video apps that are easier to use.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear, a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.