App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并且简洁明了地表达观点。

Exemplo: I have recently used messaging apps like WeChat and QQ, as well as study apps such as GoodNotes to help me prepare for my lessons.

Sugestão: 回答表达较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且丰富词汇以提升表达效果。

Exemplo: I enjoy relaxing, so I am usually interested in entertainment apps, such as gaming apps and music streaming services like Apple Music.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议理清句子结构，避免重复，并且使用恰当的连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I usually discover new apps through recommendations from the App Store, suggestions from my friends, and by browsing social media platforms like Xiang Zhu.

Sugestão: 回答内容较具体，但存在语法错误和重复，建议注意句子结构和用词准确性，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to use apps that simplify the process of finding rental houses, especially during my internship. For example, apps that offer detailed listings and allow direct communication with landlords would save me a lot of time.

× I recently use some apps for sending message like in chat apps like WeChat and QQ and and also I use some apps to prepare to prepare my study like good notes or some others.

✓ I recently used some apps for sending messages, like chat apps such as WeChat and QQ, and also I use some apps to prepare my study, like GoodNotes or some others.

这里的时间状语'recently'表示过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去时'recently used'，而不是现在时'use'。另外，'message'应为复数形式'messages'，因为发送的是多个信息。重复的'and'应删除。'GoodNotes'是应用名称，应大写。

× I recently use some apps for sending message like in chat apps like WeChat and QQ and and also I use some apps to prepare to prepare my study like good notes or some others.

✓ I recently used some apps for sending messages, like chat apps such as WeChat and QQ, and also I use some apps to prepare my study, like GoodNotes or some others.

'message'应为复数形式'messages'，因为发送的是多个信息。

× Well, I'm such kind of person that enjoy relaxing, so I'm really interested in some apps like game apps or some music apps like Apple Music.

✓ Well, I'm the kind of person who enjoys relaxing, so I'm really interested in some apps like game apps or some music apps like Apple Music.

'such kind of person'应改为'the kind of person'，更符合习惯表达。'that enjoy'主语是单数，动词应加's'变为'enjoys'。

× Well the App Store will recommend me for some some apps like gang apps like King Owner and my friend will recommend me for some apps also I will find it in some social media like Xiang Zhu.

✓ Well, the App Store will recommend some apps to me, like game apps such as King Owner, and my friend will recommend some apps to me. Also, I will find them on some social media like Xiang Zhu.

'recommend me for some apps'表达不正确，应为'recommend some apps to me'。'gang apps'应为'game apps'。'find it in some social media'应为'find them on some social media'，'on'是正确的介词，且指代复数'apps'用'them'。

× Well in the future I would like to use the apps that make it easier to find rental houses, especially during my internship. Like some apps that provide detailed listings and allow direct communicate with the house owner and and our larger. This will save a lot of time for me.

✓ Well, in the future I would like to use apps that make it easier to find rental houses, especially during my internship. Like some apps that provide detailed listings and allow direct communication with the house owner and our landlord. This will save a lot of time for me.

'the apps'改为'apps'更自然。'allow direct communicate'应为'allow direct communication'，因为动词后应接名词形式。'our larger'应为'our landlord'，'landlord'是房东的正确表达。重复的'and'应删除。