App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมและโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดเจนหรือผิด เช่น 'serving the Internet' และ 'scoring my phone page' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสมกับบริบทมากขึ้น

Exemplo: Recently, I have been using apps like Instagram and Twitter a lot because I am really addicted to social media. I often spend a lot of time browsing through my phone to keep up with the latest updates.

Sugestão: ควรตอบให้ครบประโยคและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การอธิบายว่าทำไมสนใจแอปเหล่านี้ และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ชัดเจน เช่น 'Sometimes not that often'

Exemplo: I am usually interested in real-time social media apps like Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook because they help me stay connected with friends and current events. However, I don't use them very frequently.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น การใช้ 'because' และ 'when' อย่างถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน

Exemplo: I usually find out about new apps from my friends because we both like to keep up with the latest trends. Whenever one of them discovers a new app, they always recommend it to me.

Sugestão: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น การใช้ 'because' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่เป็นทางการเกินไป เช่น 'wanna'

Exemplo: That's an interesting question because I haven't thought about it before. If I had to choose, I would like to use location apps more in the future because I don't use maps very often.

× App that I recently used, I use Instagram and Twitter or XA lot 'cause I'm really addicted to social media.

✓ Apps that I have recently used are Instagram and Twitter a lot because I'm really addicted to social media.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'App' (singular) instead of 'Apps' (plural) and mixes tenses. The phrase 'or XA lot' is unclear and likely a typo. The correction uses the present perfect tense 'have recently used' to indicate recent past actions relevant to the present, and corrects singular/plural agreement.

× Like I can't stop serving the Internet or scoring my phone page so.

✓ Like I can't stop surfing the Internet or scrolling my phone page.

The verbs 'serving' and 'scoring' are incorrect here. The intended verbs are 'surfing' (browsing the Internet) and 'scrolling' (moving through phone pages). Using the correct present participle forms improves clarity and meaning.

× Definitely about Internet, like real time social media such as Instagram, Twitter, Facebook.

✓ Definitely about the Internet, like real-time social media such as Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook.

'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'. Also, 'real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as an adjective. Adding 'and' before the last item in the list improves sentence structure.

× I find out different app by my friends like most of the time because me and my friends we're both a really trendy and when she's know about new apps she's always telling me to play it.

✓ I find out about different apps from my friends most of the time because my friends and I are both really trendy, and when they know about new apps, they always tell me to try them.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to match 'different'. 'Find out different app by my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'find out about different apps from my friends'. 'Me and my friends we're both a really trendy' is incorrect; correct form is 'my friends and I are both really trendy'. 'She's know' should be 'they know' to agree with plural subject. 'She's always telling me to play it' should be 'they always tell me to try them' for subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun use.

× Also yes I knew it by my friends.

✓ Also, yes, I knew about it from my friends.

The phrase 'knew it by my friends' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' and 'from' to indicate source. Adding commas improves readability.

× If I had to choose, I would say like about the location apps 'cause I don't really use map that often so I wanna use it more, yes.

✓ If I had to choose, I would say location apps because I don't really use maps that often, so I want to use them more.

'Like about the location apps' is awkward; 'location apps' suffices. 'Map' should be plural 'maps' to match general meaning. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'maps/apps'. Removing 'yes' at the end improves formality.