App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변에서 시제 일관성이 부족합니다. 'Recently I use' 대신 'Recently I have used'로 수정하고, 문장 간 연결어를 사용하여 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 또한, 구체적인 앱 이름이나 기능을 언급하면 더 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Recently, I have used a language learning app called Duolingo to practice English. Additionally, last night I used a food delivery app because I didn't feel like cooking.

Sugestão: 'Educational and lifestyle' 뒤에 'apps'를 명확히 해주고, 연결어를 활용해 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한, 구체적인 앱 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I'm usually interested in educational and lifestyle apps. For example, I like using apps such as Quizlet for studying and Google Calendar to manage my schedule because they help me stay organized.

Sugestão: 'Explore the abstract'는 부자연스러운 표현입니다. 'Explore the app description'으로 수정하고, 문장 간 연결어를 사용해 답변을 더 매끄럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: Most of the time, I find new apps through recommendations from friends on social media. Additionally, I often read the app descriptions and user reviews before downloading.

Sugestão: 'Liver exercise'는 오타로 보이며, 'liver' 대신 'liver'가 아닌 'live' 또는 'fitness'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 구체적인 앱 기능을 설명하고 연결어를 사용해 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

Exemplo: In the future, I'd like to try more health-related apps, such as those that track my daily exercise and diet. I believe these apps would motivate me to maintain a healthier lifestyle.

× Recently I use the language learning app to practice English.

✓ Recently I have used the language learning app to practice English.

The sentence refers to a recent action, so the present perfect tense ('have used') is appropriate instead of simple present ('use').

× I also use the food delivery app last night because I didn't feel like cooking.

✓ I also used the food delivery app last night because I didn't feel like cooking.

The phrase 'last night' indicates a past time, so the past tense 'used' should be used instead of the present tense 'use.'

× I'm usually interested in educational and lifestyle.

✓ I'm usually interested in educational and lifestyle apps.

The sentence is missing the noun 'apps' after the adjectives 'educational and lifestyle' to complete the meaning.

× Most of the time I find the new apps through recommendations from friends through social media.

✓ Most of the time I find new apps through recommendations from friends on social media.

The preposition 'on' is used with 'social media' to indicate the platform, not 'through.' Also, 'the new apps' should be 'new apps' as it refers to apps in general.

× Sometimes I also explore the abstract and read reviews before downloading.

✓ Sometimes I also explore the app description and read reviews before downloading.

The word 'abstract' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'app description' or 'summary' to refer to the information about the app.

× In the future I'd like to try more health related apps, such as the ones that track liver exercise.

✓ In the future I'd like to try more health-related apps, such as the ones that track liver exercises.

'Health related' should be hyphenated as 'health-related' when used as a compound adjective. Also, 'liver exercise' seems incorrect; likely intended 'liver' is a typo for 'live' or 'liver' is incorrect; possibly 'live exercise' or 'liver' is a mistake. Assuming 'liver exercise' is incorrect, it should be 'live exercise' or 'physical exercise.' Since the original is unclear, correcting to 'live exercise' or 'physical exercise' is better. However, since the instruction is to only correct grammar mistakes, not content, we keep 'liver exercise' but pluralize 'exercises' for consistency.