App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“focused on to waste my time”不符合英语习惯，且重复使用“convenient”。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

Exemplo: Recently, I have been using an app called Bilibili, which is a popular Chinese video platform. I enjoy watching short videos and movies on it because it is very convenient and entertaining.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议先明确表达兴趣的应用类型，然后用具体例子支持，注意语法和句子连贯性。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I usually use apps to watch movies and short videos. Besides, I am a big fan of novels, so I also use apps like Laughter and Jinjiang to read my favorite stories.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“electricity technology”应为“electronic technology”，且句子不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。

Exemplo: I usually find new apps through my best friend Simon, who is very interested in electronic technology. He often recommends useful apps to me, and I trust his suggestions, so I download them after his recommendation.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且句子重复。建议先明确表达未来想用的应用类型，再具体说明原因，避免重复。

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to try using note-taking apps because I want to organize my thoughts better. Recently, I have also been interested in cooking apps that can teach me how to prepare delicious meals.

× Well, recently I focused on to waste my time on the app which is called the Billy Billy It's a Chinese traditional medium.

✓ Well, recently I focused on wasting my time on the app which is called Billy Billy. It's a Chinese traditional medium.

动词focus后面接介词on，后面应该接动名词形式wasting，而不是不定式to waste。

× Medium apps is very convenient to me.

✓ Medium apps are very convenient to me.

apps是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是is。

× I can through the short videos on this medium and also I can watch some movies in this apps.

✓ I can watch the short videos on this medium and also I can watch some movies on this app.

动词through用法错误，应该用watch来表达观看视频；同时，apps是复数，前面用this时应改为app单数。

× It's very convenient.

✓ It's very convenient.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。

× Well, in my daily life, I prefer to use the apps to watch the movies or just through the short videos.

✓ Well, in my daily life, I prefer to use apps to watch movies or just watch short videos.

动词through用法错误，应使用watch；同时，movies和apps前不需要定冠词the。

× And what's more, I'm the big fan of the novels, so I'm interested in to use the apps can which can through the novels such as the laughter and the Jinjiang is very.

✓ And what's more, I'm a big fan of novels, so I'm interested in using apps that can provide novels such as Laughter and Jinjiang.

介词后面接动名词using，而不是不定式to use；动词through用法错误，应改为provide或read；冠词使用错误，novels前不加the；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Firstly, I have a best friend called Simon.

✓ Firstly, I have a best friend called Simon.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。

× He is a big fan of the electricity technology and the apps.

✓ He is a big fan of electronic technology and apps.

electricity technology用法不当，应为electronic technology；apps前不加定冠词the。

× He highly he usually highly recommended different apps to me and I very trusted to him.

✓ He usually highly recommends different apps to me and I trust him very much.

副词位置错误，usually和highly顺序调整；动词时态和形式错误，改为现在时；trust后不加介词to。

× After he recommended it to me I will to download.

✓ After he recommended it to me, I will download it.

will后不加to；句子缺少逗号分隔；动词后应加宾语it。

× Well, in the future I may be to try to use the right note as you know before I pay more attention to watch movies.

✓ Well, in the future I may try to use the right note. As you know, before I paid more attention to watching movies.

may后不加be；句子结构混乱，分成两句；pay attention后接动名词watching。

× But in these days I want to try to use apps to teach me to cook delicious food.

✓ But these days I want to try using apps to teach me how to cook delicious food.

want后接不定式try to use或动名词try using均可，使用动名词更自然；cook后应加how to表达“教我如何做饭”。

× I want to use the apps which can help me to cook delicious.

✓ I want to use apps which can help me cook delicious food.

apps前不加定冠词the；cook后应加宾语delicious food，而不是单独用delicious。