App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structures. For example, say 'I have recently used apps like Instagram, TikTok, and WhatsApp because they help me stay connected with my family and friends. In my leisure time, I enjoy scrolling through reels on TikTok and Instagram.'

Exemplo: I have recently used apps like Instagram, TikTok, and WhatsApp because they help me stay connected with my family and friends. In my leisure time, I enjoy scrolling through reels on TikTok and Instagram.

Sugestão: Focus on using correct grammar and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. For example, 'I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and WhatsApp because they help me stay connected with my family and friends. Additionally, I can share my photos and reels with them easily.'

Exemplo: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and WhatsApp because they help me stay connected with my family and friends. Additionally, I can share my photos and reels with them easily.

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'I usually find out about different apps through my family and friends when we gather at events. We share our thoughts and recommend apps to each other during these occasions.'

Exemplo: I usually find out about different apps through my family and friends when we gather at events. We share our thoughts and recommend apps to each other during these occasions.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and filler words, and structure your answer clearly. For example, 'In the future, I would like to use apps that help me track my health and fitness routines because I want to stay healthy and motivated.'

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me track my health and fitness routines because I want to stay healthy and motivated.

× Recently I have been, uh, use the app like Instagram, Tiktok, WhatsApp and all of other because, uh, it helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and also, uh, in my uh, leisure time.

✓ Recently I have been using apps like Instagram, TikTok, WhatsApp and others because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and also in my leisure time.

The phrase 'have been use' is incorrect because after 'have been' the verb should be in the '-ing' form to form the present perfect continuous tense. Also, 'all of other' is incorrect; it should be 'others' to refer to other apps. Additionally, 'it helped' should be 'they help' to agree with the plural subject 'apps' and to maintain present tense consistency.

× Recently I have been, uh, use the app like Instagram, Tiktok, WhatsApp and all of other because, uh, it helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and also, uh, in my uh, leisure time.

✓ Recently I have been using apps like Instagram, TikTok, WhatsApp and others because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and also in my leisure time.

The phrase 'the app like Instagram, Tiktok, WhatsApp and all of other' incorrectly uses singular 'app' when referring to multiple apps. It should be plural 'apps'. Also, 'all of other' is incorrect; 'others' is the correct plural form.

× Recently I have been, uh, use the app like Instagram, Tiktok, WhatsApp and all of other because, uh, it helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and also, uh, in my uh, leisure time.

✓ Recently I have been using apps like Instagram, TikTok, WhatsApp and others because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and also in my leisure time.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present perfect continuous 'have been using'. To maintain tense consistency, 'helped' should be changed to present tense 'help'.

× I Scroll down the reels on Tiktok and Instagram.

✓ I scroll down the reels on TikTok and Instagram.

The verb 'Scroll' should be in lowercase 'scroll' as it is not at the beginning of the sentence. The sentence is correct in tense and form otherwise.

× Usually I interested in all kind of webs, uh, like Instagram, WhatsApp, because it's helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and I also can share my umm, reels my photos to them.

✓ Usually I am interested in all kinds of websites, like Instagram and WhatsApp, because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and I can also share my reels and photos with them.

The phrase 'I interested' is missing the verb 'am' to form the present tense 'I am interested'. 'All kind of webs' should be pluralized to 'all kinds of websites'. 'It's helped' should be 'they help' to agree with plural subject and maintain present tense. 'Share my reels my photos to them' is awkward; it should be 'share my reels and photos with them'.

× Usually I interested in all kind of webs, uh, like Instagram, WhatsApp, because it's helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and I also can share my umm, reels my photos to them.

✓ Usually I am interested in all kinds of websites, like Instagram and WhatsApp, because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and I can also share my reels and photos with them.

'All kind of webs' is incorrect because 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' and 'webs' is better expressed as 'websites' in this context.

× Usually I interested in all kind of webs, uh, like Instagram, WhatsApp, because it's helped me to stay connected with my family and friends and I also can share my umm, reels my photos to them.

✓ Usually I am interested in all kinds of websites, like Instagram and WhatsApp, because they help me to stay connected with my family and friends and I can also share my reels and photos with them.

The phrase 'share my reels my photos to them' uses the incorrect preposition 'to'. The correct preposition is 'with' when sharing something with someone.

× I found out the different apps through my family and friends when we are gathered, uh, together, uh, on any functions or, or any events at a time, we're talking with each other and share our thoughts with each other.

✓ I found out about different apps through my family and friends when we gathered together at functions or events; we talked with each other and shared our thoughts.

The phrase 'when we are gathered' should be past tense 'when we gathered' to match 'I found out'. Also, 'share' should be past tense 'shared' to maintain tense consistency. 'At a time' is unnecessary and awkward, so it is omitted.

× I found out the different apps through my family and friends when we are gathered, uh, together, uh, on any functions or, or any events at a time, we're talking with each other and share our thoughts with each other.

✓ I found out about different apps through my family and friends when we gathered together at functions or events; we talked with each other and shared our thoughts.

The phrase 'found out the different apps' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'found out about different apps' because 'find out about' is the correct collocation.

× Uh, in the future, I would like to use the app like, which is helpful, helpful for my health and fitness, like, uh, which will help me, uh, to, uh, take my track my health and fitness workout routines.

✓ In the future, I would like to use an app that is helpful for my health and fitness, which will help me to track my health and fitness workout routines.

The phrase 'use the app like' is unclear and should be 'use an app that is'. 'Take my track' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'track my health and fitness'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.