App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: حاول تبقى إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب التكرار في الكلام. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة في البداية، ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل مرتب ومنطقي.

Exemplo: Recently, I have been using social media apps like Instagram and WhatsApp. I especially use WhatsApp to stay connected with my family and relatives for both personal and work-related communication.

Sugestão: حاول تستخدم كلمات أكثر دقة وتجنب التردد والكلمات الزائدة مثل "uh". رتب إجابتك بحيث تبدأ بجملة واضحة ثم تضيف تفاصيل محددة مع استخدام روابط بين الأفكار.

Exemplo: I am usually interested in social media apps, especially TikTok. It offers many live and entertainment videos that provide advice on daily life and updates on current news.

Sugestão: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام روابط بين الأفكار لجعل الإجابة أكثر سلاسة. استخدم كلمات مناسبة بدلاً من العبارات العامية مثل "gonna".

Exemplo: I discover new apps by browsing social media and searching for ones that suit my needs and offer benefits. Nowadays, many apps are developed using artificial intelligence, which makes them very useful.

Sugestão: حاول تنظيم إجابتك بشكل أفضل مع تجنب التكرار واستخدام تراكيب لغوية صحيحة. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة مع استخدام كلمات مناسبة وواضحة.

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to use many apps, but especially ChatGPT. It is one of the most powerful and unique artificial intelligence apps I have ever seen.

× The the apps I really use I recently using is the social media apps like like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my families and my relatives on the work.

✓ The apps I really use recently are social media apps like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my family and my relatives at work.

The sentence has a repeated definite article 'The the' which is incorrect. Also, 'families' should be 'family' as it refers to a collective noun. 'On the work' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'at work'. The verb phrase 'I recently using' is incorrect; it should be 'I really use recently' or 'I have recently been using'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'apps'. Suggestions: Remove duplicate 'the', use 'family' instead of 'families', use 'at work' instead of 'on the work', correct verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× The the apps I really use I recently using is the social media apps like like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my families and my relatives on the work.

✓ The apps I really use recently are social media apps like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my family and my relatives at work.

The phrase 'I recently using' is incorrect because it mixes present tense with a present participle without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I have recently been using' or 'I really use recently'. This is a present perfect continuous or simple present tense issue. Suggestion: Use correct present tense forms with auxiliary verbs when necessary.

× The the apps I really use I recently using is the social media apps like like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my families and my relatives on the work.

✓ The apps I really use recently are social media apps like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my family and my relatives at work.

The word 'families' is plural but in this context, 'family' as a collective noun is more appropriate. Also, 'apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Suggestion: Use singular 'family' when referring to one's relatives collectively and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× The the apps I really use I recently using is the social media apps like like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my families and my relatives on the work.

✓ The apps I really use recently are social media apps like Instagram and especially WhatsApp because I want to connect with my family and my relatives at work.

The preposition 'on the work' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at work' when referring to the place of employment. Suggestion: Use 'at work' to indicate location related to work.

× I always interested in the apps of social media, especially the app of Tiktok because it offers a lot of live uh, live videos and uh, all uh, entertainment videos about how to deal in your life and the news of real life, you know?

✓ I am always interested in social media apps, especially the app TikTok because it offers a lot of live videos and entertainment videos about how to deal with your life and real-life news, you know?

The phrase 'interested in the apps of social media' is awkward; 'social media apps' is better. Also, 'how to deal in your life' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'deal with your life'. 'The news of real life' should be 'real-life news'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions 'interested in', 'deal with', and compound adjectives like 'real-life'.

× I always interested in the apps of social media, especially the app of Tiktok because it offers a lot of live uh, live videos and uh, all uh, entertainment videos about how to deal in your life and the news of real life, you know?

✓ I am always interested in social media apps, especially the app TikTok because it offers a lot of live videos and entertainment videos about how to deal with your life and real-life news, you know?

The use of 'the' before 'apps of social media' and 'app of Tiktok' is unnecessary. Also, 'Tiktok' should be capitalized as 'TikTok'. Suggestion: Omit unnecessary definite articles and capitalize proper nouns.

× I always interested in the apps of social media, especially the app of Tiktok because it offers a lot of live uh, live videos and uh, all uh, entertainment videos about how to deal in your life and the news of real life, you know?

✓ I am always interested in social media apps, especially the app TikTok because it offers a lot of live videos and entertainment videos about how to deal with your life and real-life news, you know?

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am always interested'. Suggestion: Include the correct form of the verb 'to be' for present continuous tense.

× I find out different apps by scrolling to social media and searching for the new apps and what is good for me and what is gonna be benefit for me.

✓ I find different apps by scrolling through social media and searching for new apps that are good for me and that will benefit me.

The preposition 'scrolling to social media' is incorrect; it should be 'scrolling through social media'. Also, 'gonna be benefit for me' is incorrect; it should be 'will benefit me'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions like 'through' for scrolling and proper verb forms for future benefit.

× I find out different apps by scrolling to social media and searching for the new apps and what is good for me and what is gonna be benefit for me.

✓ I find different apps by scrolling through social media and searching for new apps that are good for me and that will benefit me.

The phrase 'gonna be benefit for me' is informal and grammatically incorrect. The correct modal verb usage is 'will benefit me'. Suggestion: Use formal modal verbs like 'will' instead of informal 'gonna' and correct verb forms.

× I think that there are a lot of apps produced nowadays good with AI and artificial intelligence.

✓ I think that there are a lot of apps produced nowadays that are good with AI and artificial intelligence.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause describing the apps. Suggestion: Use relative pronouns like 'that' to link clauses properly.

× I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that using the most powerful app in the artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful app I ever seen in my entire life.

✓ I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that is the most powerful app in artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful apps I have ever seen in my entire life.

The phrase 'the app that using the most powerful app' is incorrect; it should be 'the app that is the most powerful app'. Also, 'app I ever seen' should be 'app I have ever seen' to use present perfect tense. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms with 'that is' and present perfect tense with 'have ever seen'.

× I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that using the most powerful app in the artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful app I ever seen in my entire life.

✓ I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that is the most powerful app in artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful apps I have ever seen in my entire life.

The word 'app' should be plural 'apps' in 'one of the most unique and powerful apps' because it refers to one among many. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to one among multiple items.

× I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that using the most powerful app in the artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful app I ever seen in my entire life.

✓ I'd like to use a lot of apps in the future, but the one that I want to use is ChatGPT, the app that is the most powerful app in artificial intelligence and one of the most unique and powerful apps I have ever seen in my entire life.

The phrase 'I ever seen' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have ever seen' using present perfect tense. Suggestion: Use present perfect tense 'have seen' for experiences up to now.